Hi. Nice song. A few points: 1- if you are going to swear you need to state in text that you are going to at the start of the song. 2- I got bored. There is no jump around, there is no difference between the verse and the chorus(?). There should be something, even if it just a string accompaniment just to boost up the track. 3- the instruments sound flat, like it was done in a room or garage. None are forward or backwards in the mix and they are competing with your voice, which also needs some effect upon it. Nice work though.