Please review our new design

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    xtra-person-11, Nov 24, 2010 IP
  2. claw

    claw Greenhorn

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    #2
    change "Don't worry! The Ultimate SEO Solutions is here for all Small, Medium and Large Business"

    to "Don't worry! The Ultimate SEO Solutions is here for all Small, Medium and Large Businesses"

    there are quite a few gramattical errors in the copy. it looks good from an SEO point of view but for customers reading it, some of the content isn't brilliant...


    Design is nice and clean too... Good work. Could be brilliant if the content is up to scratch...
     
    claw, Nov 24, 2010 IP
  3. onlinetechsupport

    onlinetechsupport Peon

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    The site takes a lot of time to load in the beginning. yes, there are a lot of grammatical errors. has to get it checked and secondly. the pricing section is tooooo complicated. try to make it a little bit more simple.
     
    onlinetechsupport, Nov 24, 2010 IP
  4. xtra-person-11

    xtra-person-11 Active Member

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    Thanks for the valuable inputs...
    Looking forward more opinions....:)
     
    xtra-person-11, Nov 24, 2010 IP
  5. CSM

    CSM Active Member

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    If you would be into SEO you should know about meta keywords and description...

    Yours:

    
    <meta name="Description" content="SEO Services by 123-SEO India a leading Professional SEO Company India. SEO India offers affordable SEO Services India being ethical SEO Expert, SEO Consultant, SEO Firm and Link Building Services provider." /> 
    <meta name="keywords" content="SEO Services India, SEO India, SEO Company India, SEO Service India, SEO in India, SEO Company in India, SEO services in India, SEO Service in India, SEO Company, SEO Consultant, SEO Services, SEO Service, SEO Expert, Professional SEO, Affordable SEO, SEO Firm, SEO Consultant, Search Engine Optimization Company" /> 
    
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    Both definitely too long. Max 10-12 keywords, max 160-170 chars description

    Design, okay except width (I have horizontal scroll bar with 1024x768... bad).
    Code, not brilliant, 12 errors (http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http://www.123-seo.com/).

    If you would be seriously into SEO you would know about loading speed of a website and how client's leave sites thats loading slow. Yahoo/Google/Amazon did tests with slowing down their pages.

    Your Google Page Speed score: 68/100.

    Google's suggestions:

    
    Combine external JavaScript
    Enable compression
    Leverage browser caching
    Minify CSS
    Minify JavaScript
    Parallelize downloads across hostnames
    Combine images into CSS sprites
    Combine external CSS
    Optimize images
    Specify a Vary: Accept-Encoding header
    Specify image dimensions
    Defer loading of JavaScript
    Remove unused CSS
    Avoid bad requests
    
    Code (markup):
    YSlow score is 71/100.

    The file http://www.123-seo.com/lib/css/pngFix.css returns a 404... file not found.

    SEO is not only link building, submitting to directories or writing some articles... it's much more.
    And On-Page SEO is a part of it.

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    I do not know why you have this "JS script".

    <script type="text/javascript" src="lib/js/scripts.js"></script>

    
    // JavaScript Document
    document.write('<link href="lib/css/base.css" rel="stylesheet" type="text/css">'); document.write('<link href="lib/css/pngFix.css" rel="stylesheet" type="text/css">'); document.write('<link href="lib/css/pseudoElement.css" rel="stylesheet" type="text/css">'); document.write('<link href="lib/css/typography.css" rel="stylesheet" type="text/css">');
    
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    Does not make any sense at all. Just put those 3 lines into your <head> and save some JS execution.

    JS belongs not into the <head>, it should be loaded at bottom. Else it is blocking rendering the site.

    First load CSS and before the closing body tag load your JS.

    Read more at http://developer.yahoo.com/performance/rules.html

    jQuery 1.2.3 (old, bloated version) is getting loaded. Update it.

    You are trying to code HTML5 but failed ...

    <div align="center"> is deprecated, read http://www.w3schools.com/tags/att_div_align.asp

    I see a lot of inline CSS, that's pretty bad coding tbh.

    
                    <ol id="navList"> 
                        <ul id="simple-horizontal-menu"> 
    
    Code (markup):
    This "kind" of code is not valid.

    This stuff here is pretty funny too:

    
    <ul> 
    						<li > 
                        <p ><strong style="color:#0089D0">Search Engine Rank Report</strong>: We provide all the 3 major Search Engines rank report in Spread Sheet Format. We generate the Search Engine Rank Report on monthly basis and send the report through email.</p></li><br /> 
                       <li > <p ><strong style="color:#0089D0">Link Building Report</strong>: We provide the details of Link Building Report in an Excel File. Every month we send the report through email.</p></li><br /> 
                       <li > <p ><strong style="color:#0089D0">Online Support</strong>: Our online supports are available from Monday to Saturday (11PM to 12PM IST). We provide support to you through Live Support, Email Support, Yahoo Messenger, MSN Messenger, AOL Messenger, GTalk and Skype.</p></li></ul> 
    
    Code (markup):
    <br /> is not allowed in this context of ul. You should style your LIst with CSS, not style it with the help of <br />'s

    I see a lot of "old table layout" stuff in there... <div align... <p align... totally wrong usage of those properties, they are obsolete.

    Use CSS to style your sites, do not mix HTML5 with (X)HTML,...
     
    CSM, Nov 24, 2010 IP
  6. sunbros

    sunbros Active Member

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    Design of the site and content of the site is good but its taking too much time in loading so make images optimized one otherwise its pretty cool site
     
    sunbros, Nov 24, 2010 IP
  7. Nauf

    Nauf Peon

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    very slow mate , you might wanna look into that..
     
    Nauf, Nov 24, 2010 IP
  8. chennaibeatz

    chennaibeatz Well-Known Member

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    I hope you go with CSM, who listed a detailed report
     
    chennaibeatz, Nov 24, 2010 IP
  9. Lampary

    Lampary Greenhorn

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    #9
    It's loading slow and you could really spellcheck it a little...
     
    Lampary, Nov 25, 2010 IP
  10. eddywj

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    #10
    Excellent site... i like it so much... will be back later to check it out...
     
    eddywj, Nov 27, 2010 IP
  11. january14n

    january14n Peon

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    #11
    looks good for me.
     
    january14n, Nov 27, 2010 IP
  12. uebux

    uebux Guest

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    Design is good. But too many widgets and colors
     
    uebux, Nov 27, 2010 IP
  13. |-:Bharat:-|

    |-:Bharat:-| Well-Known Member

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    Nice site...loads very fast....
     
    |-:Bharat:-|, Nov 28, 2010 IP
  14. sophia88

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    Design is good. How about changing the title's font or make it bold? "Are you happy with the business results being produced by your website?" I think it should pop out a bit more.
     
    sophia88, Nov 29, 2010 IP
  15. MasterOfContents

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    Nice Site. Professional Look. But Too Slow To Open.
     
    MasterOfContents, Dec 3, 2010 IP
  16. liviaardelia

    liviaardelia Peon

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    Nice Site...

    Hi all,

    I want to buy Link Placement on PR2, pR3, PR4, PR5, and PR6 sites
    I am interested only if you can provide a list of url where I can see each of the links created. (your list will be kept confidential).

    As for prices I can offer

    PR 2: $3 for a month
    PR 3: $4 for a month
    PR 4: $6 for a month
    PR 5: $8 for a month
    PR 6: Negotiable

    If you have them, and interested with this offer,
    please send me your list detail to:
    with subject: link placement
    1. Domain :
    2. Pagerank :
    3. IP Blog :
    4. email :
    5. YM :
    6. email paypal : (payment through paypal & paypal must be verified)

    Thank you..
     
    liviaardelia, Dec 4, 2010 IP
  17. gandapunk

    gandapunk Peon

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    #17
    nice design, its clean and clearly. there are mistype on "http://www.123-seo.com/compare-seo-plan.html" link. written, "pacagke" it should be "package". :D
     
    gandapunk, Dec 4, 2010 IP
  18. stanmek

    stanmek Peon

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    #18
    yeah overall design looks pretty neat but you might want to reconsider some of the wording. maybe let a native take a look.
     
    stanmek, Dec 4, 2010 IP
  19. radiant_luv

    radiant_luv Peon

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    @CSM .. Take some rest bro ;)

    Is it a re-designed? I thought i had seen it earlier.
     
    radiant_luv, Dec 4, 2010 IP
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    radiant_luv Peon

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    #20
    Make your offer at the right section. This is a review section and why not let it be used for that purpose?
     
    radiant_luv, Dec 4, 2010 IP