Anyone care to provide any critique of our website in the following areas?? * Does the "product" come across clear?? * Does the business opportunity make itself readily available?? Any other suggestions / comments?? http://HoneyIShrunkOurMortgage.com Thanks!!
You need to make it more clear, an example is having the date at the top, that has no purpose. You do not need to fill up all the space with text. The part that starts with "Let us give you the Financial Power & Confidence to say" is what should stand out, get inspiration from those get-rich-quick scam pages, those are very good at manipulating a user into taking action.
Nice, but 1) remove email address and have contact us page otherwise you will get lots of spam email to your inbox. 2) i was thinking to suggest about metatags but it would not let me right click, why did you block right?
We blocked right click access because we actually had an issue with someone "taking" our website ... putting his own name on it ... and advertising it ... so we had to take a few steps to protect ourselves ... as much as we can ... No real spam email to the inbox ... yet ... a few I suppose ... Thanks for the input ...
I think this web site is a bit confusing. Also, the domain name doesn't make me take this seriously. However, the domain name would make a great book title. I would get a more serious sounding domain name for this web site, get rid of all the extra stuff and just make a simple sales page that you scroll down to read. Then a buy now button half way down the page, and at the bottom. Also put testimonials along the sides perhaps.
my initial reaction is that there is too much text. lots of different sizes, colors, and styles. I like the domain name, good thinking.
The domain name is in this case ... the "million dollar idea" ... that one moment of creativity has paid off very handsomely ... as the domain name is very memorable ... when someone sees it or hears it ... they are unlikely to forget it ... I do appreciate all the input ... I am looking at doing some site redesign in the next week or two ... streamline it a little bit ... make the FREE analysis and Business Opportunity stand out a little more ... change the colors perhaps ...
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Why Thank You ... we LOVE it as well ... it has been a wonderful new business for us that is really taking off!!
Thank you all for your positive comments ... Taking a look at doing a site redesign ... I'll post it for review when I have it done ... probably in the next week or so ...
Wow good and soso reviews but I tend to agree with the soso. Contact page would get the weeds (digital noise) down a bit. IE munches it a bit... Message is not clear so sorry but IMO site does not instill trust. It's work but I know you can do better laying out your content. Get to work!! LOL Good luck.
from the side of web standards - site design, accessibility and usability are very bad.. You could hire a better designer.
All ... I did a complete site redesign this past weekend ... if anyone who previously provided feedback cares to take a look ... Thanks, Raymond