Please Review new money making site

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    tmcca, Nov 16, 2009 IP
  2. breed007

    breed007 Peon

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    I really enjoy the overall look of your site.

    The one suggestion I would make is that within your posts, making the text stand out is your friend. For example, a better job with indenting, numbered and bulleted lists might improve the readability of your articles.

    Great work though.

    http://www.breednet.net
     
    breed007, Nov 16, 2009 IP
  3. mhuy2x

    mhuy2x Peon

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    The header should fit to the theme of your site and try to think of something to write in your title in the main page instead of putting your URL in it.
     
    mhuy2x, Nov 16, 2009 IP
  4. CylonX

    CylonX Active Member

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    Wordpress CMS?
     
    CylonX, Nov 17, 2009 IP
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    It's a good effort, though as mentioned, you should change the header to make it suit the theme of your site. The image stands out and is the first thing the user sees when the page loads, and I thought I'd landed on a travel/nature site.
    I would also break up those long blocks of text with images or H3 headings. If anything scares a reader off more it's long blocks of text...
     
    ellush, Nov 17, 2009 IP
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    goldykhurmi Peon

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    Not beautiful
     
    goldykhurmi, Nov 17, 2009 IP
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    This site should go places
     
    br3adman, Nov 19, 2009 IP
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    site design is too simple. add some color and change the header.
     
    mony911, Nov 19, 2009 IP
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    sakto Active Member

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    I have used this theme/template before and I guess you did not change anything specially the header.

    There's still a big room for improvement in terms of design and overall look of your site.
     
    sakto, Nov 19, 2009 IP
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    Mega B Well-Known Member

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    Its OK for a start but the header is not related to the niche and its rather bland if you could work on improving those it could work out well but at the moment it does not do alot for me.
     
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    so simple,,,please vary colour
     
    malaysianboy, Nov 19, 2009 IP
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    site design is too simple, add some color
     
    razor88, Nov 19, 2009 IP
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    netdriver788 Well-Known Member

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    The theme looks very simple but will be attractive if you add good color schemes and the layout and contents are well organised.
     
    netdriver788, Nov 21, 2009 IP
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    Its ok, just looks like about a million other sites out there.

    If you want to be different create something new, not using wordpress and not looking like a page from blogger.com.
     
    nickwilliams99, Nov 21, 2009 IP
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    Design is too simple, boring and stereotyped
     
    kelavo, Nov 22, 2009 IP
  16. ejones222

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    It.s verry nice !!!!!
     
    ejones222, Nov 22, 2009 IP