Please Review My Youtube Commerical Script

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by Ratman2050, Aug 28, 2007.

  1. #1
    Hey I recently created a nice script for a commercial I making for my new site the Dev Network.

    I need some people to review it to see whether it is funny, understandable, and the text is correct (programmer wise). It's one of those Mac themed commercials.

    thanks.

    Copyright © 2007 the Dev Network
     
    Ratman2050, Aug 28, 2007 IP
  2. Pandacowl

    Pandacowl Active Member

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    #2
    very creative nice commercial
     
    Pandacowl, Aug 28, 2007 IP
  3. kingcaw

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    #3
    Creative use of the concept - however the popularity of those ads has already spun off a lot of imitators, parodies etc so thats definitely something to be aware of.

    However in this case, for an ad targeted towards a very specific niche, I can't imagine that being an issue.
     
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    nice dude..make it better with more colorfull template..
     
    swaft, Aug 29, 2007 IP
  5. Ratman2050

    Ratman2050 Well-Known Member

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    What do you mean by that?
     
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  6. kingcaw

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    #6
    I think he may have thought you wanted your actual site reviewed - although I must admit I did visit it and start writing comments until I realized my mistake - thats what a lack of sleep and coffee does to you!
     
    kingcaw, Aug 29, 2007 IP
  7. kojakfilth

    kojakfilth Notable Member

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    haha maybe he look at your site without reading the whole post on this thread.. :D

    Nice script for a commercial. at first i thought its gonna be a "Hi i am mac and i am a PC" commercial but its not.. :)
     
    kojakfilth, Aug 29, 2007 IP
  8. Ratman2050

    Ratman2050 Well-Known Member

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    Oh I understand thanks. And also thanks for the positive reviews so far.
     
    Ratman2050, Aug 29, 2007 IP