please review my woman and fashion site

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    mikow78, Jul 7, 2011 IP
  2. p.caspian

    p.caspian Peon

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    Your landing page is ok, but too many ads in your other pages...............
     
    p.caspian, Jul 7, 2011 IP
  3. UsErNaMe_Me

    UsErNaMe_Me Peon

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    Nice content, good layout.
     
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  4. Ajay | symplyfyd.com

    Ajay | symplyfyd.com Peon

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    nice blog..but you need to work out on site loading time..its bit slow..
    if you are on wordpress use swift theme..it loads a lot fast..
     
    Ajay | symplyfyd.com, Jul 7, 2011 IP
  5. Darkhodge

    Darkhodge Well-Known Member

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    I'll keep my points as a bullet point list to keep it concise. By the way I'm only going to be listing criticisms here in hopes that you can use them to improve your website.

    • Logo - I personally don't think you should animate the logo as it is a distraction from the rest of your website. Also it's best you use one image and brand yourself with that image. Lastly is it just me or does the silhouette look a little blurry? If so then you should sort that out because it doesn't look great.
    • Ads - I have to agree on the fact that there's a little too many ads on the article pages. I'm not sure how established this website is but you want to first attract visitors into making repeat visits. Right now you would most likely scare them away with the over use of adverts. My recommendation is remove some ads, concentrate on the content, then once you have established the website and have proper readership, you can consider placing more adverts into the website.

      Another thing is the colour of the adverts. I know you are trying to distinguish them from your content, but black is too much of a contrast from the rest of the website considering you're mainly using light greyscale colours. Try experimenting with the colours so that it compliments your website a little more.
    • Sidebar Ad - I don't think you should use that shade of green, it doesn't really go with the rest of the website.
    • Search Bar - My suggestion here is rather than having 2 search bars which clutters your site, remove the default WordPress one and just keep the Google one. This will also help you increase earnings as well!
    • Vertical Alignment - Your pages (About, Privacy Policy, Sitemap & Women Stuff) have some vertical alignment issues. The title and the ad in the sidebar don't really align and this makes these pages look a little messy.
    • Posts - I just had another look at your subpages and saw that the text content starts a little lower than the image to the left. Again it'll be best if you could sort this out so that it looks cleaner.
    • Latest Post - If I'm not mistaken the image for the latest post, "Plus Size Fashion: Plus Size Woman Accessories", seems to be appearing in the wrong place, i.e. below the rest of the content. Maybe this is something you should look at.
    • Another Post - Lastly the excerpt for the last post on the homepage, "Woman and Fashion: Stylish and Comfortable with Casual Tops", seems to be having issues. It's showing code within the excerpt "... choose their clothing wisely. var addthis_pub = ''; var addthis_language = 'en';var addthis_options = 'email, favorites, digg, delicious, myspace, google,..."

    Think that's about it from me. I hope you found my comments useful!

    Hodge
     
    Darkhodge, Jul 7, 2011 IP
  6. mikow78

    mikow78 Member

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    hey....thanks for reviewing my site, your comment not only useful but also helpful...., i'll fixed it a.s.a.p
    thanks a lot..
     
    mikow78, Jul 7, 2011 IP
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    Your site looks simple yet easy to navigate. Regarding your flash, it looks slow. If you can make it quicker, the better. You can add more life to your site by suggesting texts that are pleasing to the eye and would mix well with white. Keep up the good job and take good note of the criticisms by others as well. Your site looks promising.
     
    AwesomeWriter, Jul 8, 2011 IP
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    Mega B Well-Known Member

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    Just had a quick look,the layout of the site looks fine to me,the loading speeds that other have mentioned i found that to be fine and loaded as i would expect it too.Good luck with it i think it could do well
     
    Mega B, Jul 14, 2011 IP
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    No problem at all, hope all goes well with your site! :)
     
    Darkhodge, Jul 16, 2011 IP
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    nice blog..
     
    Link seller, Jul 17, 2011 IP
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    good guys nice article
     
    newspopularity, Jul 17, 2011 IP
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    nice website!!! Wanto free advertising for it? Send me private massage!
     
    FokeBox, Jul 17, 2011 IP
  13. peterfendler

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    This is a good website. A good start. I would consider revising your navigation text. Currently you have About : Privacy Policy : Sitemap : Women Stuff

    "About" is good, but should be at the end of this list
    "Privacy Policy" Drop it from here. If you want to state it, and you should because Google likes to see these, put it at the bottom of your site (like a footer) this is where people will go for this kind of info
    "Site Map" Same as above. Put in footer. This is for seach bots and not humans
    "Women Stuff". This is good. You need more like this. Pick categories like "Women Shoes" "Latest Fashions" (update it by season) "Make-up" etc...

    I think making these changes will make your site more interesting to human readers.

    Also, think of making the colors a bit more feminin. White and black don't work? Softer colors (pink, light blue,etc...) will be more appreciated by women readers.
     
    peterfendler, Jul 19, 2011 IP
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    good website. What if you could add a vertical/horizontal navbar and categorize it!
     
    afridi_fastian, Jul 19, 2011 IP