Please review my weight loss site?

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by popnyc, Feb 17, 2008.

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    ?Any reviews of http://vibranthealthmedia.blogspot.com

    I'm most interested in this part I added, --This blog is a new hobby and my first online writing venture, not some corporate sales pitch for diet pills or widgets. A portion of the proceeds of books or weight loss products referenced are being donated to the Rainforest Alliance.


    I thought it would boost sales but not sure. I really will donate part of sales to the charity mentioned, I do have morals, but maybe I should just take it out?
     
    popnyc, Feb 17, 2008 IP
  2. blackscorpion

    blackscorpion Active Member

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    Kewl blog, I like it, not fussy, lots of white is good. The line about proceeds donated to rainforest doesnt takeaway from your site, dont no if it would boost sales either; I would leave it.:)
     
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  3. popnyc

    popnyc Active Member

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    thanks so much
     
    popnyc, Feb 17, 2008 IP
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    The site is more interesting if you sharing your own experience.
     
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    digitalduke Notable Member

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    Nice looking blog. IMHO, I would put a picture of Green vegetables instead of that coconut picture.

    But overall you have good blog and good content.

    wishing you good luck.


    best regards
    digital duke
     
    digitalduke, Feb 17, 2008 IP
  6. popnyc

    popnyc Active Member

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    Thanks for the feedback.

    What do you think of the placement of my mailing list sign-up? Do you think it is the same as ad placement?
     
    popnyc, Feb 26, 2008 IP
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    NickG7 Banned

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    Decent blog, although I wouldn't make it so obvious you want to sell Hoodia.
     
    NickG7, Feb 27, 2008 IP
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    I think the same... :)
     
    traffichero, Feb 28, 2008 IP
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    i think there is a long scroll to get to bottom, maybe make all images the same size too. Good idea to add veg not the coconot. i wish you good luck
     
    JPR, Mar 11, 2008 IP
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    I agree. The first thing I read there is smacking me with an advertisement and something to signup for. I think if you want to sell something, first you need to prove that you're an expert of this industry and not just trying to shove a product at me.

    So, my tip is to create some informative and original content first.
     
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    Interesting site, add some light colour background for attraction and change the picture of the man, add a good picture. Overall nice.
     
    gitasha, Mar 12, 2008 IP