first of all, your domain name is too large. it'll very for your visitors to mind your domain. (i think so!) site is nice overall. 3 out of 5.
I think this looks like a sales page, maybe because of the lack of design and using color for the links. Yes, I think its too simple. But if your intention are that, then its ok.
I don't like the design. The domain name is bad, not to mention it's a .net. The typography could be better. There is too much writing. You don't want to write an essay. Make it short, organized, and simple. The header and favicon are horrendous. If you want to make a good site, take what I've said into consideration and keep learning. That's the only way you can get better. Nobody on here can show you how to make a great site, you have to learn it yourself. Remember, you're asking advice on a forum where most of the people are noobs(as you can see from the previous responses).
Thank you for the response mlkshake, and everyone else. I know that the domain name is kind of long, and it is not a .com but I really don't think that will matter. My goal is for this site to rank well in the SERPS for my chosen keyword, and most of the traffic will come directly from Google (hopefully eventually). If the people click on a site in a google search, the domain name doesn't matter quite as much does it? I appreciate the feedback though. I know that I am the only one that can build my site, but I don't think it hurts to ask for reviews. I am going to keep working on it and try different layouts, change the text and pictures around, etc. Hopefully over time it will actually rank well, and then I can try more tweaks and actually see the results changing. Thanks again for all the comments. Wish me luck!
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