Please review my Website

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    I have a website I would like you all to review. Please let me know what you think as far as overall appearance as well as marketability.

    www.adultbusinesskit.com
     
    greenwing72, Aug 21, 2008 IP
  2. mdalangin

    mdalangin Peon

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    I don't like that business .. sorry.
     
    mdalangin, Aug 21, 2008 IP
  3. bobbylove321

    bobbylove321 Active Member

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    I like the design and layouts. The pictures were good and the black background was also a smart decision. However, I would say you need better copywriting on the sales page. It didn't make me "want" to give you my money. Make it more convincing.
     
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    i surely liked it. if possible add some glitter (only on borders)
     
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    Bobbylove nailed it. Might want to add some more SERP flavored content to be chewed on by spiders.
     
    dominion4040, Aug 21, 2008 IP