Please review my website

Discussion in 'Websites' started by cashinwebsites, Jul 16, 2007.

  1. #1
    Hello everyone, I am working on a project of creating real established turnkey websites, but I want to do upscale ones, not cheap ones. I created website www.cashinwebsites.com - what do you think?

    This website is 90% finished, I am just connecting some things in there and will update some content on some pages.

    I highly appreciate your oppinion, many thanks!
     
    cashinwebsites, Jul 16, 2007 IP
  2. theo-zzzz

    theo-zzzz Notable Member

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    Nice website.

    It looks a bit too much like an ebook selling website.
     
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  3. supercostsaver

    supercostsaver Active Member

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    looks good ...header can be improved ..main body font/color should be improved !
     
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  4. cashinwebsites

    cashinwebsites Peon

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    Thanks! I really want to grab their attention that is why I have a lot of text
     
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    cashinwebsites Peon

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    Thanks, what do you think should be improved in header and why is text not good? I appreciate your answer.
     
    cashinwebsites, Jul 16, 2007 IP
  6. gyjack

    gyjack Peon

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    It is a bit basic and i know that you are looking to grabs someones attention. I think that you need to put a few call to actions to catch the attention and pull people in.
    Things like click here to to contact us now. You might have sold someone with the first paragraph.
    If that is the case then allow them to contact you right away.:)
     
    gyjack, Jul 16, 2007 IP