Please review my website

Discussion in 'Websites' started by davcheong, Oct 24, 2005.

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    Please review my website http://www.x-sysonline.com

    i got few pages and wish to know which one is better.

    Thanks for reviewing.
     
    davcheong, Oct 24, 2005 IP
  2. mdvaldosta

    mdvaldosta Peon

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    #2
    parts look collided. using IE and 1024 x 768
     

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  3. dzcap

    dzcap Well-Known Member

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    Sorry to disappoint you but it looks horrible. Try looking for a design you really like and try to mimic it, or at least use a template. Your current design will probably scare a lot of visitors away.
     
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    I don't think it looks horrible for say, but it's just too plain and simple. It simply won't stimulate your visitors to stay and browse.
     
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    On your main menu, you use different fonts which makes it look awkward.
    Like the word 'Product' is not in the same font as 'Forum' .
     
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    The forum looks cool. The rest of your options sort of float around and doesn't mesh well.
     
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  7. davcheong

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    thanks for the comment. will keep in mind and will try to change abit.:eek:
     
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  8. davcheong

    davcheong Well-Known Member

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    omg:eek: !!.. i didn't notice it. But is it because when i am updating the page and visitor view mess up? cause i try few times and didnt see the error colided. trying and trying it now.:eek:
     
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  9. davcheong

    davcheong Well-Known Member

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    really thanks thanks. ;) . I think he/she didnt mean any thing, just that maybe he/she just want me to improve more, thats why he/she say like that just to make me more hard work to make the website more lookable.

    Lastly thanks for understand my website meaning. You the 1st to understand why i want it simply plain and simple.:rolleyes:
     
    davcheong, Oct 25, 2005 IP
  10. davcheong

    davcheong Well-Known Member

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    oops.:eek: maybe is my eye sight problem, really really i mean it, cos i do wear specs. Cos i just copy and paste that area, didnt notice the font is different. :cool: will try create again. Gambatte nei. Thx for reviewing. Thank you all of you. Really happy to hear from you all.:)
     
    davcheong, Oct 25, 2005 IP
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    davcheong Well-Known Member

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    Thanks. Actually the forum was one forum that i make until 4am~ 5am every day for almost 4 days just to finish it. :eek: But really hope it will attract more member. Thanks for the review.
     
    davcheong, Oct 25, 2005 IP
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    For the section headings try to make the letters blue against a white background instead of white againts a blue background.. Also break up the paragraphs into small pieces which are easier to scan.
     
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  13. davcheong

    davcheong Well-Known Member

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    hmm.. meaning that, my background color Blue and all the words content white? hmm.. nice idea also, same like my own forum. no wonder i did even like my own website color. better shift it the same as my forum. Thx for tips. really apprieciate it. Thx.
     
    davcheong, Oct 25, 2005 IP