Please review my website

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    victorywebs.org
     
    xtremers, Mar 24, 2011 IP
  2. einstein72

    einstein72 Active Member

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    #2
    Very simple template, not bad, I'd recommend you to get yourself a better logo :)
     
    einstein72, Mar 24, 2011 IP
  3. Maria Kozlenkova

    Maria Kozlenkova Member

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    #3
    I agree with einstein72. The logo should be more 'serious' for commercial websites .
     
    Maria Kozlenkova, Mar 25, 2011 IP
  4. hetalhet

    hetalhet Peon

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    #4
    As others said, It looks very simple. You can improve it by doing following:

    1. Add interesting Logo and Punch Line
    2. Add Favicon
    3. In the header part you can add your contact details as a call to action
    4. Add Social Media Buttons

    Good Luck.... :)
     
    hetalhet, Mar 25, 2011 IP
  5. Richie_Ni

    Richie_Ni Illustrious Member

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    I don't like the header much, the red words hurt my eyes.
     
    Richie_Ni, Mar 25, 2011 IP
  6. brownsville77

    brownsville77 Peon

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    Yes you should make it look more attractive its too simple
     
    brownsville77, Mar 25, 2011 IP
  7. En Cowrie

    En Cowrie Member

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    #7
    you need extra effort to deal with header. Too simple. Also, the content should be more persuasive. I think that's all.
     
    En Cowrie, Mar 25, 2011 IP
  8. Shovers

    Shovers Peon

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    #8
    Some problem with your website. I can't open it
     
    Shovers, Mar 27, 2011 IP
  9. reo69

    reo69 Peon

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    Yeah doesn't work for me either...get it fixed dude
     
    reo69, Mar 27, 2011 IP
  10. xtremers

    xtremers Member

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    sorry. domain got changed to victorys.us
     
    xtremers, Mar 27, 2011 IP
  11. widemedia

    widemedia Greenhorn

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    #11
    Not a great design. Perhaps get a graphic designer involved. Otherwise nice idea.
     
    widemedia, Mar 28, 2011 IP