Please Review My Website

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    demsy, Jul 20, 2010 IP
  2. chrkadmin

    chrkadmin Peon

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    On the holidays site, need to correct grammer - "Let's Holiday's with us" doesn't make sense. Try "Come Holiday With Us". Also, depending on your target market, "Holiday" is used in English speaking countries other than the US, which typically uses "Vacation".

    Content is also not good, looks like spun PLR.

    Needs lots of work, but you can do it if you put your mind to it!

    Best of Luck!
     
    chrkadmin, Jul 20, 2010 IP
  3. qdungeng

    qdungeng Well-Known Member

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    Best template ,your site very nice
     
    qdungeng, Jul 20, 2010 IP
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    nice..i prefer the second one..more professional
     
    Hs McD, Jul 20, 2010 IP
  5. www.ww1.in

    www.ww1.in Well-Known Member

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    nice sites, but you can do better
     
    www.ww1.in, Jul 20, 2010 IP
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    Other than already being said, your niches are great. Two of the top niches nowaday to get some great converting offers.
     
    cpamountain, Jul 20, 2010 IP