Please Review My Website

Hello,

I'm going to be running a small program, and would like as much feed back as I can get. Some things I'm looking for feedback on are.

Do you under stand how the system works?

Do you under stand how to join the system?

Can you tell how much it cost to join?

Do you think the site converts?

Please give as much feed back as you can the more detail the better. I'm trying to make this site short and sweet and convert.

http://www.rohrermarketing.com/moneyx

Thanks

 

Dear Friend,
though you have attempted to put it on, it appears you have not done the job wholeheartedly. It gives a feeling of lot of vacuum in it. The presentation is also not very interesting. It lives many questions unanswered. How much amount to pay as onetime payment. What monetary benefits would it offer and why should one go in for it etc.

It does not explode your ideas clearly

 

Dear Friend,
though you have attempted to put it on, it appears you have not done the job wholeheartedly. It gives a feeling of lot of vacuum in it. The presentation is also not very interesting. It lives many questions unanswered. How much amount to pay as onetime payment. What monetary benefits would it offer and why should one go in for it etc.

It does not explode your ideas clearly

 

nice design, did you used kindof minisite creator ?

 

nice web, what you use to design your site

 

Hi,

I designed it myself.

 

any time ....i think u can help me design i hope

 

the design is serious, well done.

 

nice design in the similar site.

 

I'm glad yous like the design.

How about the rest of the site ? Does it sell you, do you understand it?

Thanks for all the reviews.

Chris

 

I am sorry to say, but from the point of view of a visitor, it looks like scam site. I know you might have done a lot of hardwork, but this site does not entice me to pay anything.

 

very nice design

 

To some it may, but its all about your target market. If you know where to find people that buy into these types of sites then you'll be fine.

In all of my years online Flashy/Hyped up sites sell the best.

Trust me I use to think the same, but after testing many of sites with both a clean design vs. a flashy money design the money design always out preformed the clean fresh look.

I don't really care about design. I'm glad some like it, but what I care about the most is if people understand how its works, what it does, and how they can join. If nobody understands that then this site will not convert.

 

I like your design ..
In fact the professional design can increase 70% conversion rate..
Just suggest from me..
Maybe, you must be to put other free gift like ebook or other bonus that related with your product or service..

 

Thank you.

I might add extra "bonus" gifts depending how it converts the way it is. If I don't like the conversions I have videos and other goodies I can add to hopefully boost up conversions.