please review my website www.gapz101.com

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  2. Midknight

    Midknight Peon

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    Bad english.

    "We deliver the best quality code, on time and within your budget; cheapest price ever on the web. We also offer installation and best instruction to client. So, why not try our service. Request a quote below and we will discuss details about your project. We look forward to serve you :)"

    Try

    We deliver the best quality code, on time and within your budget. We offer the cheapest price ever on the web. We also offer installation and the best instruction to our clients. So, why not try our service. Request a quote below and we will discuss the details of your project. We look forward to serving you :)

    Well I like minimalist pages, so you got that going for you. You desperately need a strong logo on the page to compensate for its spartan appearance. Also the site is overpowered by other peoples ads. Currently I count about four instances of advertisements and you should have a max of one.

    Otherwise I like it for its simplicity.
     
    Midknight, Jan 11, 2010 IP
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    gapz101 Well-Known Member

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    Hey, thanks for your comment it should be better now or so still wanting your best ideas
     
    gapz101, Jan 11, 2010 IP