Please Review my Website. Please tell me what you think!

Discussion in 'Websites' started by 2010Business, Jul 5, 2010.

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    Please Review my Website. Please tell me what you think! go to: www.12Magazine.com

    Thank YOU ALL !!!
     
    2010Business, Jul 5, 2010 IP
  2. jazzcho

    jazzcho Peon

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    #2
    Too big meta description
    Move the style css to a different file instead of having it inline.
    Add more content, keyword rich to the keywords you target.
    Add h1,h2,bold etc. tags

    And change the crappy design! You may SEO the f*cking thing but in the end, human eyes will see it. You don't want it to be butt ugly.

    Also, don't forget, the real power is in offpage seo, so build links.
     
    jazzcho, Jul 6, 2010 IP
  3. Dark Legend

    Dark Legend Greenhorn

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    #3
    You need some better graphics done because atm it looks like it's been done on a low budget.
     
    Dark Legend, Jul 6, 2010 IP
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    softwareengg07 Member

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    You need to give a good look to your site.I think some change in color &images. you can add option of category.
     
    softwareengg07, Jul 7, 2010 IP
  5. ankushsinghal

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    #5
    Meta Desc and the title is too long... Write some keyword rich content in the meta desc part, near about 280 words..
    Re-size the tab as it seems not good..
     
    ankushsinghal, Jul 7, 2010 IP
  6. mabiawilliams

    mabiawilliams Peon

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    Oh man what have you made it??? I suggest you to get a free Wordpress theme which can be called a good one then this. Post some quality content for user. Still you can use the design but need to renovate a lots from CSS to Layout.
     
    mabiawilliams, Jul 7, 2010 IP
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    #7
    As the previous post mentioned, install wordpress, get a nice clean theme and install it. Add your logo and add some keyword rich articles to turbo-charge your sites SEO. On wordpress install All-in-one-SEO plugin as this will allow you to rank high for multiple keywords in the organic search.
     
    BenDamage, Jul 7, 2010 IP
  8. sarahk

    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    All of the above... but proof read your site. Even if English isn't your first language you should have had a friend or two review the site and point out the glaring errors like
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    and learn how to avoid code like
    <p><br />
      &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; We offer Affordable Website Services trough our Sponsor and Web Service provider Hot Apples Web Development and Graphics Design Company.</p>
    
    HTML:
    Put the javascript and css into separate files

    but mostly, get it on WordPress and make life easy for yourself.
     
    sarahk, Jul 15, 2010 IP
  9. Prince L

    Prince L Peon

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    too basic, need to redesign
     
    Prince L, Jul 15, 2010 IP