Please Review My Website: http://www.traffic-blowout.com/

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by imgtube, Dec 16, 2006.

  1. #1
    Hi, I just finished building my site:

    www.traffic-blowout.com

    Please give me some feedback, positive and negative.

    It is only 2 days old and there is only 1 article. I am going to start writing a few articles per day.

    Thanks
     
    imgtube, Dec 16, 2006 IP
  2. Anduril66

    Anduril66 Well-Known Member

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    #2
    I like, the design/placement of your logo. It might flow better if you matched the colours of the left gradient of your logo and the rightside gradient on the image beside it. As is now, the index page is too cluttered with articles. I love the navigation bottons and their placement.
     
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  3. imgtube

    imgtube Well-Known Member

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    Do you think it looks cluttered? There is nothing much to ad to it because pictures are irrevelant to the subject.
     
    imgtube, Dec 16, 2006 IP
  4. Anduril66

    Anduril66 Well-Known Member

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    I just thought the default template columns looked a little cluttered, reminded me of a newspaper. The non-index pages look great. I thought it would be fixed when you add your own content.
     
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  5. baumann93

    baumann93 Peon

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    #5
    It is a little on a plain side for me... you need to spice it up a little - insert images, make the borders around your articles.

    Also, I have read somewhere LOL that the very first H1 tag should not be "Welcome bla bla bla":) , It should tell the search engines what your site is about ;)

    The bottom banner would give you laughable if any CTR. It is better to replace it with the link ad.
     
    baumann93, Dec 16, 2006 IP
  6. mastermemei

    mastermemei Banned

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    #6
    It looks too simple, maybe you can use some images as suggested by previous posts
     
    mastermemei, Dec 16, 2006 IP
  7. WarBud

    WarBud Peon

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    #7
    FIrst impressions:
    I enter the site and see "Traffic Blowout". I don't know what the site is about. I see lots of text that all blurs together. I leave.

    You need some sort of header text that explains what the site is about. A short, simple sentence. For example: "How to build website traffic"

    You need to add some color to the site. Images would be great to break up all the text.

    Articles:
    Don't use "Welcome to traffic blowout!" as your intro. "Traffic building articles, advice, and links" may interest someone to keep reading.

    Don't put "Sign-up or our Monthly Newsletter, It's Free!" as one of the main articles. You haven't hooked anyone yet. You have not shown me anything that would make me want to sign up.

    "Article #1- An Introduction to Building Online Traffic" Remove the "Article #1" and change the title to something like "Building Online Traffic: An Introduction".

    You don't have long to hook someone when they first visit. Attention spans are short. Give them short, interesting titles that make them want to keep browsing your site.
     
    WarBud, Dec 16, 2006 IP
  8. WarBud

    WarBud Peon

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    Get creative with images. There are lots of images to be found cheap or free.
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    Above is an easy photo to represent traffic and will add some color to the site.
     
    WarBud, Dec 16, 2006 IP
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    #9
    Too much text on that site, people are interested in pictures not text. use pictures to grab viewer's attention.
     
    iCeBLink, Dec 18, 2006 IP
  10. kittyluver

    kittyluver Notable Member

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    #10
    Simple and Nice site. If you're ad sense specific, please place the ad in the rectangle format in the start of your subpages. This will fetch you good result. ALL THE BEST!!!
     
    kittyluver, Dec 18, 2006 IP
  11. IM Angel

    IM Angel Peon

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    #11
    I like the logo of your site.

    However, your homepage looks like a newspaper. Try adding in pictures or maybe videos.

    Also, the google adsense ads background on your subsequent web pages change to grey to make it looks nice.

    Lastly, the support page is not nicely done up. You need to have a program which allow online submission of requests. Maybe you could sign up for autoresponder.
     
    IM Angel, Dec 18, 2006 IP
  12. imgtube

    imgtube Well-Known Member

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    Its meant to look like a newspaper so people know that my site is filled with information, not just cluttered with advertisements and other useless stuff.
     
    imgtube, Dec 21, 2006 IP
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    #13
    I have seen your site it's looking nice and background color is cool.
     
    jyoti, Dec 21, 2006 IP
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    #14
    layout of site is not proper.
    2 make attractive site u hv 2 insert pictures.

    Abhilash.
     
    ecolatur, Dec 22, 2006 IP
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    #15
    ur site is not opening. may be some problem with the server. try to maintain consistency of the site as it will result in bad rankings. take care. bye
     
    sunsrini, Mar 30, 2010 IP
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    #16
    soorry but i can not reach ur site ..
     
    hitech4life, Mar 31, 2010 IP
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    #17
    looks great the design is nice but i don't like the colors
     
    bingo4bingo, Apr 5, 2010 IP
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    LaMarcus Greenhorn

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    #18
    Doesn't seem to want to load for me.
     
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    #19
    dear please chk your website it's display "web site is unavailable."
     
    malishajang, Apr 6, 2010 IP
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    #20
    ur site not working..
     
    yveslorenzo, Apr 7, 2010 IP