Please Review my website content

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  1. #1
    hi
    Please Review my website content . Any suggestions or comments are appreciated.
    my website is : http://iosgamesacademy.com
     
    bidslover, May 20, 2012 IP
  2. jassintadoe

    jassintadoe Peon

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    Before you ask anybody to review your website content I'd suggest really carefully checking your spelling and grammar. The first line of actual text on the page is "We are helping you to find the best of all the IOS frameworks and also get Excellent tutorials for all platform" which is rife with errors. That line should read something more like "Helping you find all the best iOS frameworks and tutorials for all platforms". The poor spelling and grammar is distracting and appears very unprofessional.
     
    jassintadoe, May 21, 2012 IP
  3. bidslover

    bidslover Member

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    #3
    Thanks jassintadoe . It's done If you have something else please PM
     
    bidslover, May 21, 2012 IP
  4. linuxerpro

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    #4
    niche site... look good
     
    linuxerpro, May 21, 2012 IP
  5. Irfi0009

    Irfi0009 Banned

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    #5
    your website is so nice
     
    Irfi0009, May 22, 2012 IP
  6. xendurinan

    xendurinan Banned

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    #6
    Your site looking professional.
    I don't think that you should change any thing. Best of luck.
     
    xendurinan, May 22, 2012 IP
  7. HiTMAN69

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    good luck :)
     
    HiTMAN69, May 22, 2012 IP
  8. tridosil

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    Ya you are right .
    Site is awesome.
    Beautiful and colorful.
     
    tridosil, May 23, 2012 IP
  9. Irfi0009

    Irfi0009 Banned

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    #9
    good looks and i like your website Designing.
     
    Irfi0009, May 23, 2012 IP
  10. the writer

    the writer Well-Known Member

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    Wow, I have to agree with jassintadoe. The site looks great but the grammar is way off. I tried to read your first post, Creating Your First IOS Application, and there were so many errors in the first two paragraphs that I stopped reading. I know your site isn't about that but sometimes you stop a sentence in the middle without finishing it; hard to read a tutorial when that happens. You have to fix those editing errors.
     
    the writer, May 23, 2012 IP
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    I think you should check grammer and spell check, you should use copyscape to check unique contents too, i would say you should take better care while writing
     
    cybertweet, May 23, 2012 IP
  12. Irfi0009

    Irfi0009 Banned

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    #12
    vary well din butt back link more important.
     
    Irfi0009, May 26, 2012 IP