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Please review my website and suggest ways to market it

Discussion in 'General Marketing' started by Mukund, Aug 27, 2007.

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Mukund Peon

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Michael Reily said: ↑

You can improve on your front copy. like
Do you want to earn money through get paid companies , If yes then click to find out how.
Do you want your website to make excess profits by getting targeted traffic, If yes then click to find out how.

These 2 sentences are very vague and does not really entice anyone to do anything. I'm not sure whether does this paid companies really work or not so I'm going to give you a random example.

"Do you want to earn money through get paid companies , If yes then click to find out how.",

maybe you can change to

"Discover The Top 5 Companies That Really Paid Me $1500 Dollars For Just 22 Hours Of Work"

Another thing is the first sentence you are teaching about paid companies, the next sentence you are talking about targeting traffic to your website, so what are you teaching people?

There's a lack of focus over there. Either you focus on how to earn $$ from paid companies, or you focus on getting targeted traffic. But don't put both in 1 single salescopy.

That would only cause confusion to your brand as well as to the perception of your visitors.
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I 'll surely work over it...thanx for it

Mukund, Sep 1, 2007 IP
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hey guys review my website and give me tips to improve it to the best possible way

Mukund, Sep 19, 2007 IP

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