Please Review My Web Series "I Breathe This" Episode 1

Discussion in 'Websites' started by theurbantwist, Oct 20, 2010.

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    Hello all,

    I run an entertainment magazine at http://www.theurbantwist.com

    We just launched a brand new web series called "I Breathe This" this past Monday.

    The series is a little edgy and if I had to make a comparison, I would say that it's like the HBO series "The Wire" infused with Eminem's "8 Mile".

    Anyway, here's the link to the show...

    http://theurbantwist.com/videos/web...10/18/i-breathe-this-episode-1-meet-the-crew/

    I hope that you enjoyed it. There will be a weekly episode released every Monday.
     
    theurbantwist, Oct 20, 2010 IP
  2. accendo

    accendo Greenhorn

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    Well, I can say that I liked the Intro, the music, the scenery, and even the text for the credits. For me, it pretty much went down hill from there. The acting wasnt great. A lot of catchy phrases, Do you and I'll do me. A couple others that I forgot. I did like that perhaps you're going to share/discuss the difference in the home situation between the two characters. Oh, and to start off with somebody giving weak rhymes. You almost lost me there, but I wanted to give a fair review.

    Music, cut scenes the rims cut scene was nice. All of the scenes for the intro were cool. Is this going to be entirely in black/white.

    Sorry, I am not an expert, just a movie fan. The acting just didnt flow for me. The scenes seemed segmented, jump from one to the next, but perhaps you have build background with the first episode.
     
    accendo, Oct 20, 2010 IP
  3. theurbantwist

    theurbantwist Well-Known Member

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    Thanks for your honest feedback...

    Just to clarify my role in this project. I own The Urban Twist and I produce and promote films for my TV/Vids section on the site. With that said, I just produced this particular series at a distance so I can't really say that I had a lot of input over final product but I did have final word on whether or not the series was good enough to be featured on site.

    I really do appreciate your feedback because I plan to produce more series for my site and every little bit of criticism helps. The future programs I plan to shoot or produce won't be of this series' nature. I'm looking for variety. A little bit of crime here. Romance there. Comedy here. That kind of thing.

    But to answer your questions, Episode 1 does lead up to more and this ep just lays down the back drop for the series. The entire show is in Black and White and the series is a 12 episode or weekly series with what you just watched being the first one.

    Thanks for watching.
     
    theurbantwist, Oct 20, 2010 IP