I thought the site is ok... not great but... If it's your first website then you'll learn how to improve it... Add some content and I'm not sure if the graphics are original
i think this site is looking pretty good...functional and all... the one thing i think you should think about changing is the background... if you can get rid of the green and replace it with a cool image like some spookey forest warcraft style or something it will really complete the site
The overall layout is okay. As for the content, it's kind of hard to read it and to be honest, I lose interest at the very beginning of visiting your website. My suggestion is to divide the content wrapper into two or three columns with the entry into the left column. Good Luck !