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Please Review My Travel Site

Discussion in 'Websites' started by LindaShopper, Sep 4, 2014.

  1. #1
    Dear All..

    DP members,

    I have a travel blog.
    Give me suggest to develop this blog.

    Site Names: http://DominicFrisby.net/

    Thanks... :)
     
    LindaShopper, Sep 4, 2014 IP
  2. sarahk

    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    #2
    I'm totally confused about the site. Your username is Linda, the url implies it's Dominic's, the text makes it clear it belongs to a married man. The about us page left no wiser about who is running the site.

    The text needs to be edited - alot! The style of writing makes me wonder if the site wouldn't be more successful written in a language that you are more comfortable with. Given the population of India you could probably get a bigger following writing good hindi than bad english.
    This article intro tells me that Goa is set up to cater for honeymooners. I'm not a honeymooner therefore I shouldn't bother going to Goa. Hang on, though, the second sentence says it's excellent for me to go to with my family. Dang, I'm confused!
     
    sarahk, Sep 7, 2014 IP
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    Patricia Ann Lee Active Member

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    #3
    Your blog is too plain and simple though the text color combined well with the background, but still it is too plain.
    Also, for a travel blog I expect pictures or videos that will make a travel blog more interesting and inviting to read.
    Anyway, what specific review do you want to get from your blog? I mean, what do you want to achieve after hearing our thoughts about your blog site?
     
    Patricia Ann Lee, Sep 7, 2014 IP
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    ByteChef Active Member Affiliate Manager

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    #4
    Yeah needs pictures or you can use some graphics like vectors related to your post
     
    ByteChef, Sep 7, 2014 IP
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    The blog is on travel, but the theme is poor. A travel blog must go with more pictures than written contents. Get an elegant looking theme for your website. It will even make interest to the visitors for reading the posts.
     
    wordslinger, Sep 8, 2014 IP
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    #6
    You should concentrate on your blog as it may cause a downfall in your page rank as your domain name doesn't relate to your content. Its just a plain blog where you should put menu in top of the bar i.e beside home and about us to looks good. Just see my blog and change it accordingly My Trips Guide (http://www.mytripsguide.com/)
     
    Hotel Booking Software, Sep 8, 2014 IP
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    My Weight Loss Dream Member

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    Hello Linda for your blog here are a few things I would start with:

    1) Better theme - It looks cheap and old like a free theme and a much better theme or moving onto a skin with thesis would look much better
    2) There is no monetisation
    3) Content - content needs improving as it is very basic right now and it can be seen anywhere and it doesn't grab my attention - when I had a travel website it had a lot of pictures that got people thinking about where they were travelling too and people love to read things such as "top 10 beaches in Greece"
     
    My Weight Loss Dream, Sep 10, 2014 IP
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    onemorepixel Well-Known Member

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    #8
    You site/theme looks plain and simple, the travel blog can be more interactive and interesting by adding nice colors and images, please check this goabeaches.org for inspiration for travel related blog! hope this helps you

    Thanks
     
    onemorepixel, Sep 12, 2014 IP
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    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    hate to tell you this @onemorepixel but that site is very broken. beautiful, though
     
    sarahk, Sep 12, 2014 IP
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    onemorepixel Well-Known Member

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    @sarahk i really dont know what are you talking about!
     
    onemorepixel, Sep 12, 2014 IP
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    hi linda,
    your blog is simply designed layouts as perfect blog with good unique content. love it.
     
    CreativesSystemNetwork, Sep 13, 2014 IP
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    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    it is so far from a blog (perfect or otherwise) that I wonder if you actually looked at the site!!!
     
    sarahk, Sep 13, 2014 IP
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    HaqBahoo Banned

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    #13
    you need create more pages like travel to Austria etc..
     
    HaqBahoo, Sep 15, 2014 IP
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    will be good to add a few pics to text and link on the services for travelers..
     
    skymoney, Sep 16, 2014 IP
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    Can anybody tell me
    What is the popularity to make chat software for customer support?

     
    Hotel Booking Software, Sep 24, 2014 IP
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    The site looks so simple. Every time I click on a link I have to scroll down to view the content. The site is not attractive to see. There are no more categories to easy to use it. You should avoid extra spaces in the website. Also the contents are well written, I didn't find any images that most of the travel sites have.
     
    Ben Weir, Oct 7, 2014 IP