Please Review My Traffic Sites

Hi,
I am currently working on two projects about generating traffic.

One is a membership site that has a free sign up at http://www.traffics-cool.com/free/

The other one is a paid product and the sales page is at http://www.30daytrafficflow.com (any thoughts on potential price for this one?)

Any reviews would be appreciated and your opinion on which one to go with first would also be appreciated.

Regards
Dave

 

Very well designed pages, both sites looks very good and attractive..Header images looks perfect .

 

Thanks hashif,

I agree the graphics are great. The guy who does them produces some really cool stuff.

Thanks again for checking them out.


Regards
Dave

 

Might look good but laughable in the seo department. "30daytraffic" You have joined the thousands of so called "seo experts" who can not even optimize their own page. You lack H1 heading, image alt tags, no 301 direct for starters.

 

Thanks for the friendly advice globegenius.

I never pretended to be an seo expert hence the request for help!

It is my first sales page and will change before it is released. I missed the alt tags as I normally use them on all images. 301 direct/redirect whichever, I would need to seek help on that one as it is not something I am familiar with.

Thanks again for pointing those things out and I will work on the ones I can.

Regards
Dave

 

hi
your first sales page is quite good & i think there s no need to change.

 

I think you should go for first site for your project.

 

Traffics cool looks nice for a free site, but I would experiment more with the call to action button placement etc to test what layout converts the best.

 

Thanks guys, I appreciate your feedback.

rajneesh. At some point I am hoping to have both products live but when that will be I am not sure. I think you are right about which one to go with first though.

zenid. I tried to keep the sales pitch minimal because personally I am getting fed up with war and peace type sales letters.
As far as the placement for the call to action button, have you any suggestions I could try. As it is not properly live yet it is hard to tell how well it is converting but I am open to any suggestions.

Regards
Dave