Please review my text!

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by jakoob, Apr 19, 2014.

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    I belive that all my articles are filled with errors.

    http:// magazinedating.com/2013/10/romantic-date-ideas/

    Can you please confirm, this is a bad article?
     
    jakoob, Apr 19, 2014 IP
  2. perfectpoint

    perfectpoint Well-Known Member

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    I like the idea behind your article however it looks like it may need some fine editing :) all together its a nice page but the grammar is a little off. Honestly this is a very easy fix.. I would recommend to maybe hire a editor from fiver ($5) investment that can make a major difference for you.
     
    perfectpoint, Apr 20, 2014 IP
  3. jakoob

    jakoob Well-Known Member

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    What would you rate the text, 1 to 10?
     
    jakoob, Apr 23, 2014 IP
  4. stefan007

    stefan007 Active Member

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    I like your article but there are some thing you can do to make it look better. Right now for me its a 7 out of 10.
     
    stefan007, Apr 24, 2014 IP