Please review my technology site

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  1. FrisnandaCenter

    FrisnandaCenter Peon

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    #21
    great blog

    design is simple


    The Gadgetz Zone
    Make Your Life Be More Modern
     
    FrisnandaCenter, Dec 21, 2009 IP
  2. screetdevil

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    #22
    add a variety of interesting images
     
    screetdevil, Dec 21, 2009 IP
  3. thoms

    thoms Peon

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    #23
    thanks for your review all

    and I hope more review from the other

    thanks....^^
     
    thoms, Jan 4, 2010 IP
  4. Eugene Quarles

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    #24
    overall nice site but there is something that is just not doing it for me. Maybe it's the header but nice layout and good content.
     
    Eugene Quarles, Jan 4, 2010 IP
  5. joshuthomas

    joshuthomas Well-Known Member

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    #25
    hey

    work on the header and if possible on the blue and yello combo (not much going together), apart form that site is simply great !

    cheers
    josh
     
    joshuthomas, Jan 7, 2010 IP
  6. emforce

    emforce Member

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    #26
    I have to say that the content up on the site at the moment is a bit below par. Your grammar is awful, and spelling hasn't been fully checked. This was only for the one article I looked at but by those chances it looks like the others could pretty bad as well. So I would say you have to work on your english a lot.

    For example. Your Modern Warfare 2 review.

    The review needs to be written far more fluently. You keep jumping all over the place with your sentences. I mean you need to really link them together so that they sound good together. Just keep practicing though and you will get it, I often try to read quality news papers and articles online in order to improve my english as people will more often than not forget about a site that has bad grammar and a lot of spelling mistakes.

    Other than that the design is quite nice, although the banner is a bit boring. The time for the pages to load is quite high, so you might want to work on that.

    But I just don't feel that your design matches the niche. I think you could find a lot better designs. Have a look at some of your top competitors and plagiarize their design and layout, don't copy it totally, but instead use it as a guide to finding a good template.

    Hope this helped! :D
     
    emforce, Jan 7, 2010 IP
  7. thoms

    thoms Peon

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    #27
    for emforce
    thanks for your criticism and suggestions

    I must admit I was not so good in english
    but I'll keep trying to fix it

    and then
    do you know where i can get a good template...???
     
    thoms, Jan 8, 2010 IP
  8. emforce

    emforce Member

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    #28
    Search on google for some good free premium wordpress themes. There are literally thousands, so you should find one you like. However if you can't find one that suits you, find one that you quite like and try modifying it so that it suits your needs. For instance I found one and am still continually modifying it so that it becomes better and better. However I think you should have gone for a simpler domain name as the one you have is pretty hard to remember.

    Your english will improve as you continue to work on it, so keep trying and you will have be writing brilliant articles in no time.

    All the best!
     
    emforce, Jan 8, 2010 IP
  9. thoms

    thoms Peon

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    #29
    for emforce
    thanks for your sugest
    know I have had some tempelate for my site
    but I must edit those tempelate first...

    thank you very much....^^
     
    thoms, Jan 14, 2010 IP
  10. cranos666

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    #30
    i like it, i taught you used datalife engine as cms !
     
    cranos666, Jan 15, 2010 IP
  11. nestria

    nestria Peon

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    #31
    Just wondering, what does "akyapi-inshaat" mean?

    In your "Categories" column, "Tips & Trick" should be "Tips & Tricks" -- at least that's how I usually see it written here in the U.S. And you might want to be consistent with using the plural form: "Cameras and HD", "Phones and PDAs", etc.
     
    nestria, Jan 15, 2010 IP
  12. thoms

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    #32
    OK
    thanks nestria
    I will change soon....^^
     
    thoms, Jan 19, 2010 IP
  13. thoms

    thoms Peon

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    #33
    new article

    please review

    thanks....^^
     
    thoms, Feb 3, 2010 IP
  14. Testing whiz

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    #34
    Its a great site. And potential to become the best in market.
     
    Testing whiz, Feb 3, 2010 IP
  15. thoms

    thoms Peon

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    #35
    thanks....^^
     
    thoms, Feb 9, 2010 IP
  16. zenithuk

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    #36
    good site with good theme also.
     
    zenithuk, Feb 9, 2010 IP
  17. thoms

    thoms Peon

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    #37
    thanks so much....^^
     
    thoms, Feb 22, 2010 IP
  18. noobee

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    #38
    simple nice design!
     
    noobee, Feb 22, 2010 IP
  19. thoms

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    #39
    some my own made
    some from my friends
    and the others from Internet.....^^
     
    thoms, Feb 23, 2010 IP
  20. Glinch

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    #40
    great choice, instead of your sub-domain its all feel good, Best Of Luck
     
    Glinch, Feb 23, 2010 IP