Please review my squidoo page

Hello all, I have posted my first article with squidoo and it is getting WIP status which means "it is not worth sharing" with search within squidoo or search engines. Since I'm new to this I'm not 100 % sure if it is becasue I'm new or my article is just plain bad. I thought it is pretty good. Can you guys take a look and let me know what you think of it?

http://www.squidoo.com/hunting-with-a-video-camera

Thanks,

 

Squidoo is junk -
do not waste your time.

 

niase work but is color is not good

 

Why is Squidoo junk? Can you explain?

I love all the spam on DP... It is not my site, just my article.

 

Sorry, but I do agree with vna1611 that Squidoo is junk - if you're going to post stuff like that, you're better off signing up for a blog as that's what you're trying to do anyway.

 

Thanks for the reply, I do run 2 blog sites and that article is a niche of one of them. My idea was to create a couple of those lens as they get high ranking SEO and add links back to my sites (which I did).

So my question is, is squidoo not a good site to do this? If not why and do you have any suggestions? I also write Ezine articles as well which you can see HERE.

Thanks for the reply's.

 

Article is so nice but blog is better option for you not a squidoo lense.

 

I did reply to you, but I guess my reply is still in Moderation waiting for a Moderator to post it.

 

v nise dear butt do moor

 

I'd make a blog and do article submission to digg and stumble updon, stuff like that, you will have more success.

 

OK thank you, I will do that as well. Already have the blogs.