Your squeeze page is less attractive, you can insert some transformation journey pics like "From Then--To Now". You can also give some sneak peaks in the form of a small video of the product you are providing. You should describe the whole "FREE REPORT REVEALS..." portion with some more information. You can also remove the 2nd "Click Here For Free Instant Access" link as it is repetitive and unnecessary.
Its a standard landing page template. You can hire a designer from the design section and get a much better design which will help convert better. The current design is very basic and does not reflect your offerings to the best.