Guys,[TABLE="class: tborder, width: 100%, align: center"] [TR] [TD="class: alt1, bgcolor: #F5F5F5"] I have just revamped a squeeze page and would be delighted to hear you thoughts on the copy, colours, bullet points, fonts the lot! Please provide honest feedback. Going to test it shortly. The more advice the better... Top Secret Affiliate Classroom[/TD] [/TR] [/TABLE]
ah yes, the fly-by-night marketing scam... uhm, I mean 'squeeze' page. Let's see how bad this one is. lack of padding above header with the rounded corners looks like a rendering error. The large secondary heading/CTA using some goofball image replacement or font method that's completely inaccessible and of course is in a H1 "SEO Scam Artist style" when it is not the heading under which all other headings on the page would be a subsection (which is what H1 MEANS). The yellow highlight for nothing looks more like a mistake than intentional, the comment placement means rendering bugs in legacy versions of IE and FF likely from this being slapped together any old way in a WYSIWYG or using Dreamweavers half-arsed idiotic 'templating'... ... and as a squeeze page, by definition standalone content -- what the blazes are you doing running it from inside turdpress for?!? Just want it to be slow loading? Especially with all the javascript/jquery for nothing rubbish that's being thrown at it?
Thanks buddy. A good critique of a website is a great opportunity to offer your skills and assist in the redesign. You seem to have missed that point. Maybe next time. Hope all your posts are not this unfriendly.
Its ok but I dont like the shadow of the black box...and maybe if you try another font for that black box..its too neue....
I love the things setup by you its looking good according to me its a perfect squeeze page but you can add more spice according to your taste to make it better
This is a pretty good one.... But it some time give 500 internal error... It seem's proper care is not taken by you...
yeah, traditional squeeze page, + brief info + catchy points but there is a lot of waht to do - text top should be H1 tag because of SEO, cufon scriptig is fine - there is lack of emotions, because emotions are selling, you have to do it more fancy, more images, look for other squeeeze pages and make inspiration, - make background with dark color, and middle background leave white. It makes more attention to your text - "Get Free Report" button is too low, put it more up, because it is the first thing you want user to click = your squeeze page doesn't have power, few days shoul help
Your squeeze page is good but still it need more changes to make it more good. You need to add more text to the page and need to explain little bit more about your product. You have just written titles of topics and little info about each title. Try to make little longer discription for each title. It will engage your visitor and make him/her wonder about your product. Try to give future view to your visitors, like what happen after taking your products. Hope you like this suggetion!
yea, you're right ... i remember one sentece of successful affiliate ... "Make Me Wonder!", your customer have to be amazed.
Looks fine mate to me. Got to laugh at some of the comments people make. The info is enough to sign-up, I doubt anyone would have second thoughts because of a shadow on the box.
How about to put your name to make more convert. It's a course I think the visitors need trusted profile.