Please Review My Squeeze Page

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    randpropz, May 9, 2011 IP
  2. virtiis

    virtiis Member

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    Maybe get some design, make a menu, cause now it is easy to get lost in it.
    Purple, red, yellow. You should ask some advices from designers about it
     
    virtiis, May 10, 2011 IP
  3. randpropz

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    thanks for your reply virtiis,
     
    randpropz, May 10, 2011 IP
  4. webjeber

    webjeber Greenhorn

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    Hi and congratulations on a very nice site! If I could make a few suggestions,
    1. A site heading would be nice...something like Natural Ovarian Cyst Cure
    2. You don't need to have any text highlight color for your lead in statement: Are you One from Many People Who Need Ovarian Cyst Cure, Free From PCOS Forever? as well as No Surgery, No Birth Control Pills And No Dangerous Medications and What exactly makes This Ovarian Cysts State-of-the-art So Exciting? Their enlarged and bold text is sufficient. The other highlights are fine.
    3. Increase your text size as it is now a little small for comfortable reading.
    4. Perhaps add another page or two, as there is too much information on your main page. Simplify your main page with links to the rest of your information.

    Hope this helps!
     
    webjeber, May 10, 2011 IP
  5. helpguide

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    ~ the violet background throws me off a bit
    ~ can have the product image at the top, need to scroll to see that
    ~ too much text is jam packed. need to spread them a little.

    thanks.
     
    helpguide, May 10, 2011 IP
  6. a++

    a++ Well-Known Member

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    You have to fix few things.The header is plain with no logo or any intro about your website.Just move the light violet stripe on background to the top so that it will be a header.Also the website has no title in it.
     
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  7. Jaycuse

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    I agree with the comments to add a logo or product image at the top.
     
    Jaycuse, May 11, 2011 IP
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    HI !
    This is my quote !
    No space between the lines. Background don't match with the color of the book and the signup button. No headers.
    You can put the book on the header of the page too. You can customise the sign up button with the book.
    If you do these ameliorations, your sales page conversion will increase.
    I am a pro Graphics Designer. If you want I can make pro changes on your sales page and send you a JPEG image.
    If you are happy with the improvements, We will discuss about the price.

    Contact me at
    or
    Skype : rolandgraphicsdesign

    Best Regards.
     
    rolanduc, Jun 24, 2011 IP