Please Review My Squeeze Page for My Clickbank Product

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by mafiaboy, May 12, 2008.

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    After having had a lot of success with the internet I want to try to to sell my own product. I have a good product with good visitors, but this being my first ever squeeze page I can help but think it sucks.

    If it sucks the gay right out of life please tell me. I do not want however people criticizing my niche. I would also appreciate it if you could tell me thinks I should do , remove or add.

    ( yes i know there is a couple of grammar mistakes btw :p , also didn't but in the PayPal buttons.)

    http://wowmafia.org/clicbank

    the domain still had to be bought , I just want my webpage + sales letter to be reviewed

    Thnx,
    Mafiaboy
     
    mafiaboy, May 12, 2008 IP
  2. briangmu

    briangmu Member

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    I'm getting a 404 error
     
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  3. Dima K

    Dima K Peon

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    yep, I can't access your page either
     
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    ronnyeo Well-Known Member

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    404 error is mean file not found.
     
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    The blog looks ok, I think the text is too big you should consider making it smaller.
     
    kingofsanda, May 14, 2008 IP