please review my site

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    dev_04, Aug 12, 2008 IP
  2. KarmickWorld

    KarmickWorld Member

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    Font color (golden), which is almost mixed up with your background color. And I found difficult to read your text. So change it to white or any other color, which can be readable.
     
    KarmickWorld, Aug 13, 2008 IP
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    OOpppppssss I just checked your KWs & descp. Reduce you keywords to max. 15 and worked on those 1st then slowly buildup the content and target the other KWs. Else you would find difficulty to market and get the ranking for all those KWs. Also in description part do not put KWs only. Write a sentence which will talk about website and its features.
     
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    Also I found you have added lots KWs on your website pages at the bottom. So I suggest you to remove all those KWs else your website would be in a great trouble.
     
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    You need a text introduction to the site. I don't know what to do when I get there, or where to go. The whole white area at the top is wasted space imo
     
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    The layout and design of the site isn't bad but when you have so many keywords in the
    title of your page, your description, and at the bottom of the page it makes your site
    look spammy, you should fix this.
     
    kingofsanda, Aug 13, 2008 IP
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    I agree with everyone so far.....not sure what your site is about. Also, Adsense ads should be more near the top left and center.....as recommended by most DP members I've talked to in the past.
     
    rchase14, Aug 13, 2008 IP
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    i dont like these keywords all over the page. You have a lot wasted space, for example these images are useless.
     
    warrior034, Aug 13, 2008 IP
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    Thanks all of you I will follow your suggestion.
    This will realy help me.
     
    dev_04, Aug 13, 2008 IP
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    I think it is not a good idea to put a bunch of keywords with out any meaning... it is not recommended for seo.
    Otherthan that.. describe your site in that place inlcuding the keywords which will give a good meaning to the sentence.
     
    tendulkar2, Aug 13, 2008 IP
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    Thanks all of you for your post
    Ok now look again
    I have done some changes
     
    dev_04, Aug 17, 2008 IP
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    now its basically empty.....are you not done yet?
     
    rchase14, Aug 18, 2008 IP
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    #13
    click to "navigation" and then check again
     
    dev_04, Aug 18, 2008 IP
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    Well, that is a great "programming feature" but as for the design, nobody would know to click there unless you told them to.
     
    rchase14, Aug 20, 2008 IP