Please review my site!

Discussion in 'Websites' started by cordyceps, Jul 23, 2008.

  1. #1
    Hello world, I wanna ask you to review my site..
    Sorry, if my site is in Indonesia language and still amateur..
    This site is made by cordyceps sister who has just learn php and html from Mr. cordyceps.. Mr. cordyceps is more better than me, he is my teacher in programming..:)
    This is my site :

    http://tinyurl.com/6y38wg
     
    cordyceps, Jul 23, 2008 IP
  2. kingofsanda

    kingofsanda Peon

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    #2
    You should remove the glow effect on the text in your header. You should
    remove the yellow background in the body text of the page, the text in the
    top half of the page is too large you should make it smaller. It's a little difficult
    to read the text in the navigation, you should change the background color of the links.

    The color scheme and the typography needs work.
     
    kingofsanda, Jul 23, 2008 IP
  3. salman.fazal

    salman.fazal Peon

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    #3
    Hello
    Good website and color scheme and the typography needs work.
     
    salman.fazal, Jul 23, 2008 IP
  4. Scarlett

    Scarlett Banned

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    #4
    I'll be honest here...

    - The yellow background of the text body is like trying hard to be noticed.
    - You should definitely change your font.
    - Either change the background color of your navigation bar or change the color of the font there.
    - And I agree with King of Sanda, Please remove the glowing effect of your header. It doesn't look neat.

    I hope this could help. Best of luck in your website!
     
    Scarlett, Jul 23, 2008 IP
  5. Jeremy Yak

    Jeremy Yak Peon

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    #5
    Why so much blinking? Blinking text is not only annoying, but it is removing the seriousness from your website.
    Fancy fonts are cool, but readability is more important.
    Try working on the color scheme some, your going color crazy :p

    Other than that, it's not all that bad. Good luck :)
    ~Jeremy~
     
    Jeremy Yak, Jul 24, 2008 IP
  6. arena84

    arena84 Well-Known Member

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    #6
    wahh dari indonesia ke ni pak. saya dari malaysia. anyway, good site but the main menu at the left is kinda blurry. you could change the color of that part. overall, looks ok.
     
    arena84, Jul 24, 2008 IP
  7. cordyceps

    cordyceps Peon

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    #7
    Thanks for the comment. I will try hard to make it more good..
    Now, I'm making new site in English content..
    Thank you very much..
     
    cordyceps, Jul 31, 2008 IP
  8. Tractor1

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    #8
    Too colorful for me and the italics menu items are difficult to read.
     
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  9. dooop

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    #9
    same with Tractor1
    too colorful and blink blink
    i think that template from another sites ...
    may site like that ...
     
    dooop, Jul 31, 2008 IP
  10. wiseguy_75

    wiseguy_75 Member

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    #10
    You need to tone it down a bit...

    First change the font color and style to something a little more contemporary
    Get ride of almost all of the yellow highlight and blinking...
    And the color scheme ... like everyone else says... needs work. Look at the very bottom of your page. The two different blues together just don't work well at all.

    My suggestion... find a site that you like and try and duplicate it and add your own little touches.
    ***Please note: I am not saying to copy someone elses site... just simply get ideas from sites you find appealing**

    Good luck!
     
    wiseguy_75, Jul 31, 2008 IP