Please Review My site

Discussion in 'Websites' started by mokimofiki, Jul 17, 2008.

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    http://www.mofiki.com

    Please give me any advice and critcism you have. Be blunt if need be its the only way to improve.

    Thank you :)
     
    mokimofiki, Jul 17, 2008 IP
  2. lokielookies

    lokielookies Well-Known Member

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    #2
    To me, your site is looking good.

    It's just the 'news' sidebar... Maybe you should try adding it to the right side of your page, instead of the left side.
    Also, the last letters are touching the column border (i'm using Firefox), which looks a little un-professional.


    ;)
     
    lokielookies, Jul 17, 2008 IP
  3. SUPERSELL

    SUPERSELL Guest

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    #3
    For Me You Don't Must Change !

    Now Is Very Great .
     
    SUPERSELL, Jul 17, 2008 IP
  4. Civin

    Civin Well-Known Member

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    Personally the one thing that stuck out the most was the ad placement on your site. That's not the first thing I want to see when visiting a site. It's too 'in your face' where it is currently placed. Just my opinion though :)
     
    Civin, Jul 17, 2008 IP
  5. writingguruchick

    writingguruchick Guest

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    i agree with the person above....watch out for ad placement it can deter someone from staying on your page long.....

    good luck!
     
    writingguruchick, Jul 17, 2008 IP
  6. Scarlett

    Scarlett Banned

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    I agree with them. It looks like your are more promoting the ads than your own products.
     
    Scarlett, Jul 17, 2008 IP
  7. mokimofiki

    mokimofiki Well-Known Member

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    #7
    Thanks to all of you that replied with input mofiki.com will be updated soon and I will be taking your input into consideration when updating.

    Again thank you,
    Moki Mofiki
     
    mokimofiki, Jul 18, 2008 IP
  8. steelfrog

    steelfrog Peon

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    #8
    The graphics, especially the product boxes, need some text. The text is heavily aliased and plain. I'm with the rest of the posters, the Ad placement is awkward. Also, I don't think the logo needs a reflection; it kind of looks tacked on.

    Apart from that, the menu's font should be larger and have a bit more padding on the top and bottom.

    Otherwise, I like the color scheme and it's fairly easy to navigate.
     
    steelfrog, Jul 18, 2008 IP
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    #9
    too much information on one page, too dull colours, you can do much better
     
    rowen77, Jul 19, 2008 IP
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    MazeMiami Banned

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    need to organize the information better .. too much to take in all at once
     
    MazeMiami, Jul 19, 2008 IP