Please review my site

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    writeon, Jul 14, 2008 IP
  2. mbreezy

    mbreezy Active Member

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    The layout looks rather shoddy. You have one side bar (on right) that is really wide and goes down way too far. Narrow it up and have 2 side bars (one on each side of main content).

    You have a typo in your domain name... You're missing an "i" in "writing". I'm fairly sure this will deduct some points from you in regards to SEO.

    Your content though isn't bad. Rough niche, freelance writing, but a quick search it appears to be original content.
     
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  3. ozan

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    Looks broken to me. What's going on with #sidebar?

    Also get rid of everything in #top-part - it's all useless.

    You have plenty to work on, but that's a start.
     
    ozan, Jul 14, 2008 IP
  4. Project Mobius

    Project Mobius Peon

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    hi writeon,

    i don't really mean to offend you but you should draw out a layout before actually implmenting it (if you haven't already done so!) it looks as you just threw everything in there. The blue header is great, what happened to the rest??

    again i'm just trying to help, sorry if i have offended you
    PM
     
    Project Mobius, Jul 14, 2008 IP
  5. writeon

    writeon Active Member

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    No offence taken. I really am looking for advice. Thanks I will try and sort it out
     
    writeon, Jul 14, 2008 IP
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    writeon Active Member

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    Thanks for the advice - I am still not quite sure of myself with websites
     
    writeon, Jul 14, 2008 IP
  7. writeon

    writeon Active Member

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    Hi

    thanks for the advice the typo is deliberate = long story will try and sort out the sidebars though
     
    writeon, Jul 14, 2008 IP
  8. Snowball1

    Snowball1 Banned

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    your site looks good. I like that blue header. you also have good ad placement but maybe you can remove this text "Freelance Writing/Research SQUIDINC WRITING AND RESEARCH" and move header further up. it is not bad. i give you 6/10. I'll check back later! .. good luck :)
     
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    The site looks sometimes broken, please check the links properly

    Good Luck!
     
    designrepublic08, Jul 15, 2008 IP
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    links_Expert Banned

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    nice site , no suggestions at the moment, keep up the good work
     
    links_Expert, Jul 19, 2008 IP
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    I like the site looks nice, however could improve bit on the content
     
    LinksMaster007, Jul 19, 2008 IP