Please review my site

Hey guys,

If you could please review my site, mainly the front page, and tell me how effective you'd think that sales letter would be?

I'm still working on it, but I'd like some constructive criticism if possible.

Thanks,
Nick

www.validxhtml.net

 

Hey friend,
It is nice site but i think that you should do more efferts on it and try to do sumthing new in it.

 

efforts on what? something new on what? please be a bit more specific. I appreciate your help though.

REgards,
Nick

 

Sorry, it took too long for me to load, I had to close my browser

 

where is the link to your site?

 

http://www.nickzakharyan.com/ <-- next to his avatar

I can't load the site, though..is the site down?

 

Sorry, that's not the site i wanted reviewed. I added the link in again, but here it is for those of you who have repplied.

www.validxhtml.net


Thanks Again,
Nick

 

Your "order" link does not work ... but other than that ... I like it ... simple yet effective ...

I assume your "order" page will have some type of pricing options ...??

 

Looks great, order page is 404, but the home page is very effective.

 

Thanks guys. The reason the order page is 404 is because i haven't actually finished writing it, so I havent' changed the permalink to redirect it to the actual order page.

Thanks for your support.
Nick

 

I like the site, easy on the eye - maybe change the titles in the text to the same color pinkish as the x in the main title to make them pop out a bit more, other than that looks very professional.