Please review my site

Discussion in 'Websites' started by LWS, Apr 27, 2007.

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    I would like to hear what members say about this site,
    this is a simple e-gold based referral game + randomizer :)

    http://www.mlmexpress.net

    Thank you!
     
    LWS, Apr 27, 2007 IP
  2. bbrian017

    bbrian017 Well-Known Member

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    You might want to contact your host regarding the load time of your website. The site looks empty so you might need some more information :p Overall I like the template, I'm a fan of yellow so imo it looks good. I also want to say I like how you used the "white" text to post important information, I seen it and read it without even thinking, kind of a cool concept. Good luck with the site friend.
     
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  3. xtv

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    #3
    your website is not working!
     
    xtv, Apr 27, 2007 IP
  4. grg

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    Sometimes working and sometimes not. Problem with hosting. Not much to review in site itself.
     
    grg, Apr 27, 2007 IP
  5. WebGyver

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    Is this just a working draft? Or is this the "real thing"?

    As mentioned by others, the load time is a little long. Could that have something to do with the banner perhaps?

    As far as the home page is concerned, there's way too much text. For online readability, I would either link to STEPS or make them one collapsible area, so the people who want to read about the steps can do so -- and all the others won't experience immediate information overload.

    As far as SEO:
    - No META tags whatsoever?
    - No keywords within other HTML attributes? TITLE? ALT? NAME?
    - What about some good and catchy text in the page HEAD/TITLE?

    Everything else: Perhaps your audience is very straightforward and reads all the text on your home page. But how about some very basic graphics, charts or something to appeal to the visual senses?

    Right now, everything has almost the same font size and weight, and nothing stands out. How about conceptualizing some of the ideas in a visual way? Then, if somebody wants more information, let them click through and explain everything on separate pages.


    For what it's worth,

    WebGyver
     
    WebGyver, Apr 27, 2007 IP
  6. 8everything

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    What would make the site look less plain are drop shadows on the right and left table of the site! Try to incorporate some brown font in your content area also.
     
    8everything, Apr 27, 2007 IP