please review my site

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by wumple, Apr 14, 2007.

  1. #1
    Well, here's my first niche site...and my first steps towards earning money online. Let me know what you think, if you have comments/feedback etc in terms of layout, design, SEO, whatever.

    Also BTW I have more articles being written so if you're going to say I need more content I've got it on the way :)

    www.sixpackabworkouts.com
     
    wumple, Apr 14, 2007 IP
  2. UneekTT

    UneekTT Peon

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    #2
    I think it looks great, I love the layout and the colors are nicely done.

    You should have lots of success with this site IMO.

    Best of luck!
     
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  3. uttoransen

    uttoransen Prominent Member

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    #3
    your header is nice, a cool header at the top makes a lot of difference! i like your 3 column template also.

    since you have used, "|" in the title, i have to say, your site is properly optimised,

    so you have adsense ads there, try to get a square unit, the 250*250 square ad unit works really well, your click through will imporve. surrounded by your content that ad unit will look and work pretty well.

    get your title tag at the top of all the meta tags, that helps a lot in search engine rankings.

    the only thing that is a problem is: your google ad is scrollable, it is not fitting properly, and that is against the tos. your ad should be completely visible, look at the ads by google, it is not even showing properly! get that fixed and you will have absolutely no problems!
     
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    8everything Peon

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    Try changing the green blocks on the upper left side to blue so it can match the color scheme better.
     
    8everything, Apr 14, 2007 IP
  5. wumple

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    Oops, that was left over from an old design...thanks for pointing that out.
     
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  6. uttoransen

    uttoransen Prominent Member

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    #6
    here are the tow pics that will tell you how your ads looked on my screen!
    cheers!
     

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  7. wumple

    wumple Peon

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    Hmm I have a half banner there, 468x60, I'm pretty sure that's what they're supposed to look like...thanks for the screenshots though.
     
    wumple, Apr 14, 2007 IP
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    #8
    i love the header. nice abs!!!
    the tools are very useful... i actually learned a lot from the site.

    forums??
     
    thenewnewguy, Apr 14, 2007 IP
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    mitcharr Notable Member

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    Very Nice Modern And Clean Layout and them, i think you should either change the blue in the header to green, or the green in the dots to blue, because they dont suite overly well IMO
     
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  10. wumple

    wumple Peon

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    Forums are coming! The only reason I haven't put them up yet is because I'm waiting until I've gotten some money to invest in posters to get it started, I don't want them to sit there empty..looks bad :\. The calories burned tool is also being programmed right now, so that'll be up in a few days.

    Also I changed the green dots up at the top to a blue logo...I think that looks better.
     
    wumple, Apr 15, 2007 IP
  11. wumple

    wumple Peon

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    Were you talking about the url not showing? I just noticed they're not there. Is that going to get me banned?
     
    wumple, Apr 15, 2007 IP
  12. wumple

    wumple Peon

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    Oh nevermind, I just checked the ad format page and banners aren't supposed to show urls...
     
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    #13
    The language switcher does not work.

    the right "Send me a free report" should have the same style (not color) as the left colum
     
    momo22, Apr 16, 2007 IP