Please review my site

Discussion in 'Websites' started by Prasenjeet Kumar, Dec 27, 2015.

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    Hi Fellow members need your expert suggestions in order to improve my site on all aspects. Please give me your valuable suggestions as I am a tech guy and doesn't know much about other aspects like SEO, getting traffic etc.
    My Site URL is techcolite.com
     
    Prasenjeet Kumar, Dec 27, 2015 IP
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    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    It looks great but I do wonder why you are writing in English and not a language where you have greater proficiency. Maybe you just need to get someone to proof your writing?

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    I'm not sure it is a good thing for a freelancer to announce that he doesn't like to work hard or take direction

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    Agent000 Prominent Member

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    The content is useless poorly written junk with an appalling use of the English language and grammar. Suggest you give up.
     
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    Thanks For your constructive critic. I am working to improve it.
     
    Prasenjeet Kumar, Dec 28, 2015 IP
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    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    Lets translate that from Australian to a more politically correct version of English. As noted, your proficiency in written English is poor and suggests that it probably shouldn't be your language of choice for the blog. Not everyone wants to read English sites. India has a huge population - you could probably get a better readership locally than you could using English.

    Then there's your topic - when you were writing up your business plan so that you could justify the time and effort you're planning on putting into the site you did do a competitor review right?
    • You saw how many tech blogs already exist?
    • What is yours going to offer that the others can't or won't?
    • How are you going to get that across to your readers quickly?

    I took a look at this page techcolite.com/idea-of-ott-advertising-best-deal-for-broadcasters and finished reading none the wiser. I couldn't tell if it was a general update for regular users, potential advertisers or what.

    I can see where you got this snippet of info from, but what does it mean to "touch"?
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    This one comes across not so much as an article but as an ad, and sure enough there's a link at the bottom

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    Did you cringe writing this? How hard is it to open a gif in paint and save as. Who worries about disk space these days when you can just slap another hard drive into your computer. The measly size of a graphic is of no consequence and a gif is usually smaller than a jpeg anyway.

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    If your readers need to be shown how to save a gif as a jpeg then they probably are never going to need to know how to download a youtube video in Ubuntu. Installing it might be a good article. Advantages of using it might be a good article too. You need to decide who your readers are going to be, and their level of prior knowledge, and write consistently at that level.

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    sarahk, Dec 28, 2015 IP