Can you please review my service page: http://odihost.com/create-an-online-store/ http://odihost.com/convert-static-html-website-to-wordpress/ What do yo think I need to improve? Thanks in advance
Maybe its just me but your colour scheme doesn't look very good (i.e the grey on grey thing going on haha). Apart from that I thing that your copy is perfectly fine. Good luck
I like both the designs, simple and yet straight to the point. Just 2 things, In the first link you could make the demo section look more prominent by using a bigger font size and image. Or move it to the right corner. Increase the width of the form buttons to cover up the some of blank space.
I think that you could use a bigger font and also center the writing. Also, to look like a big brand, get a 1-800 number, this will give your service more trust. You could also add a live chat support client like Zopim or something to get people engaged in your site and answer any possible questions they might have. On the convert static html to wordpress, bold the price, I had to search to find the price. Also what you could do, is push the price as a special.. Discounted price for the next 10 buyers only or something like that.. Also those rotating categories don't look very good in my opinion, so I would change that. These are just possible tweaks and you should just test things out with a nice amount of traffic and see which converts the best. Good luck in any case