hmmmmmmmm average site I didnt like the color of your blog and you are not updating your blog on regular basis this is very much important
Hi, To be honest there isn't really anything to review. All it is is a wordpress theme with 2 links, a text header and some content. You need to go back to the drawing board with this. I'd recommend the foloowing: - come up with a logo and colour scheme. Maybe use a colour scheme related to golf (green, white etc.) - Put in more content and sections. At the moment you have an RSS feed and search. Wht are people gooin g to search for if there is no content or read in an RSS feed. - You need some images and text formatting. users will just cick away if they see a block of plain, unparagraphed text. - Don't make it look like you just installed a wordpress theme and stuck it online. Reaally work on the graphic design, build up good content, get a navigation structure gooing and then report here. Hope this post doesn't come across as harsh, just trying to give constructive criticism. All the best.
Also - your content needs to be proof read for grammar etc. ie: "Most of the Golfers needed revolutionary and magical design iron that improves their Game" doesn't make much sense and should read something like "most golfers required a revolutionary, magical design of golf iron that improved their game" and so on through your article. I don't know where you are from but if English is not your first language then ask someone on here to proof read it for you and I'm sure they will be happy to oblige.
Ok - this is finally a good start!!!! This is one of the few sites around here that I have seen actually actively targeting SPECIFIC keywords for traffic. Awesome. Now the site needs work to make it look credible - some pictures, refined header and layout (perhaps a better WP theme) and about 5 categories with some additional content. And, of course - where are the affiliate ads???