please review my site

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    choice, Oct 28, 2006 IP
  2. rosiee007

    rosiee007 Notable Member

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    Site and layout looks good. Are these your own ebooks that youre selling? Also, maybe you can add 'Links' or 'Sitemap' to the tab after 'Contact' in the top navigation.
     
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    daboss Guest

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    my opinion - a lot of personal preferences in it:

    1. decent banner and color scheme
    2. change the font - it's terrible as it is
    3. change the size of the font - 1 or 2 sizes smaller
    4. drop adsense from one of the columns - if you want more than 1 block, i suggest using a horizontal block in the footer or somewhere in the main body
     
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  4. daytimetvisrottingmybrain

    daytimetvisrottingmybrain Peon

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    spend another 16 hours on it... at least. Your choice of font may look fine to me and you but anyone with even the slightest vision impairment is gonna have trouble reading your page. Increase the quality of your images too, the low-res images make your site look like it hasn't been updated since 1995
     
  5. choice

    choice Prominent Member

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    made a couple of changes to the home page so far

    changed the font

    and added links to the last tab
     
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    Overall - I'm not a huge fan of the layout here area couple of comments:
    1) There are too many different fonts and font sizes - pick one and stick with it.
    2) The image of the woman reading is blurry and really does not make sense.
    3) Why do you have a HTML 4.01 validated icon - really
    who cares?
    4) All of your tabs except for the Links one start with a capital
    5) On your sub pages - I'm not a fan of center aligned paragraphs
     
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  7. choice

    choice Prominent Member

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    #7
    made a few more changes

    lost the image of thw woman and replaced with a book

    all text is now just one font

    fixed the link tab
     
    choice, Oct 28, 2006 IP
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    #8
    good job
    every thing is good.it looks good but only one thing doesnt looks good for me.
    in your header.there is a book picture.it looks bad for me you will change or remove it.
    good luck
     
    karinca, Oct 29, 2006 IP
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    Site layout look nice. But left and right side google ads shown not good together. i think remove one of them and put some banner or graphical item or ad.

    Regards
     
    master06, Oct 29, 2006 IP
  10. choice

    choice Prominent Member

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    removed google text links from right side of homepage and replaced with image ad

    will do the same to the rest of the site if feedback is good
     
    choice, Oct 29, 2006 IP
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    Now new layout better then old. Good luck with your site.

    Regards,
    Mustafa
     
    master06, Oct 29, 2006 IP
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    I like the settup, it is a nice looking site.
     
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    #13
    Given the changes you made from the above suggestions I would say it is looking pretty good. The layout is clean...
     
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  14. Matthew Tyndall Media

    Matthew Tyndall Media Peon

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    Clean easy to read site.
    Have you started to get any traffic?
     
    Matthew Tyndall Media, Nov 2, 2006 IP