please review my site

Hello ,

About a week ago i posted 2 links to my sites to review. I got great tips from you guys. (Like not to work with frames etc).
Now I've been working on another site these days and i've put it online to review.
THE SITE IS NOT FINISHED YET. (links etc don't work yet)
I have to optimize it and make it search engine friendly. I just want to know what you think about the lay-out and the placement of the ads.

By the way , i've put it on a free webspace server and the domain name will be something like alcohol ........ .atspace.com
The atspace part in the domain ... has this anything to do with getting traffic to your site ? I mean is it better to get a domain like alcohol ...... .com (without the atspace part ?

Please tell me what you think and if you have any optimizing tips and tricks ... i'm willing to learn.

By the way , thanx for the great replies everytime.

http://alcohol-addiction.atspace.com

Thanx

 

I've just uploaded an improved version.
Please , if you got any hints or tips ,let me know.

Thank you
Cheers

 

maybe change your links from Page 1 - Page 2 to something more describing to the article, and your thought process?

 

Thanx a lot , great tip.

Cheers

 

peet1, you should add meta tags (keywords and description) to the pages also.

Also, you should make sections like 'Articles', 'News', 'Sitemap' and add them to a proper navigation on your site.

 

Hello guys ,

Thanks for the tips again. I tried to improve it all.
Also took my site of the atsense webserver a brought it to an own domain.

http://www.alcohol-addiction-solutions.com (copy+paste)

Let me know what you think guys.

Cheers