Please review my site

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by Timeschange, May 31, 2009.

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    Timeschange, May 31, 2009 IP
  2. mmurtha

    mmurtha Peon

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    #2
    The site is simple but okay. If it were my site, I'd put a lot more content on it so you will get more organic traffic eventually from the search engines. I'd also shrink those images a little to make them match the rest of the site more. They aren't like overly huge, but they are a bit bigger than I would use with the text and rest of the site.

    Hope this helps ...


    Mary
     
    mmurtha, May 31, 2009 IP
  3. sarirejo

    sarirejo Well-Known Member

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    #3
    i don't have any reason Why buy from you.
    make your tittle more descriptive, not just "Home"
     
    sarirejo, Jun 1, 2009 IP
  4. Dee2007

    Dee2007 Active Member

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    I like the header, but the rest of the site lacks something, I agree more contents would greatly improve it, currently it just looks empty. Also I'm not overly keep on the background, I don't think it adds anything to the site, it's a bit dull.

    Just my opinion :)

    Dee
     
    Dee2007, Jun 1, 2009 IP
  5. MadViral

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    I see a small typo at the top I think, Where it say Out of all the brands of watch, It should say Out of all the brands of watches, Don't you think?
     
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  6. MRR-Empire

    MRR-Empire Peon

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    You have a lot of wasted space beside the images. I would align the pictures to the left and then put the text next to it.
     
    MRR-Empire, Jun 1, 2009 IP
  7. Digital_shubhi

    Digital_shubhi Illustrious Member

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    #7
    I agree with you !! Header is very good but the remaining part lacks something.
    Also, add a favicon in your site so that it would look better.
    Good Luck with your site.

    - Digital -
     
    Digital_shubhi, Jun 1, 2009 IP
  8. kaioken89

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    site seems to load a bit slow on my end. But that might just be me. Perhaps making the body look more professional would make me want to buy from you. Currently, it just looks too plain, white and dull. Maybe a different background? Spice up the template, the header looks great though.
     
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  9. Timeschange

    Timeschange Peon

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    Thank you everyone for the comments so far, I am definately going to make some improvements now. Please keep them coming.
     
    Timeschange, Jun 1, 2009 IP
  10. johntucker

    johntucker Banned

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    #10
    nice design, simple but looks great!!
     
    johntucker, Jun 2, 2009 IP
  11. Kosmix5

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    The writing could use some help and the grammatical errors need to be corrected. I would condense what you really want to say in one keyword-rich paragraph at the top of the screen with the less important text buffering the bottom. Then I would definitely reduce the size of the product photos, add several more and link them to their respective product pages. Make it easier for your customers to make those impulse purchases. After all, what is SEO when your customers don’t want to spend money with you?
     
    Kosmix5, Jun 2, 2009 IP
  12. littleprayerbox

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    Overall it looks very amateur, but not like super bad amateur. One thing that would help a ton is to float your text blocks against the product picture. Would save real estate on the page and looked more congealed. Kinda like this pic.
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    If you don't know how to float well, there are many different ways, just ask for help in the CSS area.
     
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  13. Timeschange

    Timeschange Peon

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    #13
    Changes have been made, please can you give your opinions.
     
    Timeschange, Jun 2, 2009 IP
  14. Shawn Barkley

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    #14
    I did not see the site before the changes were made. I agree the header looks great and gets your attention. Although it did load a bit slow on my end (it could be because I am in a hotel sharing a WiFi network).

    I like the content next to the pictures. There is still something lacking in the over all design. Maybe too much white space between the background and the sides? I like to keep it simple, but maybe this is too simple.

    Post testimonials from customers to lend credibility and support to your site and products. Testimonials are a great way to build confidence with potential buyers.

    Keep up the great work and good luck.
     
    Shawn Barkley, Jun 2, 2009 IP
  15. san007san

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    good looing !! i like the header :)
     
    san007san, Jun 3, 2009 IP
  16. netdriver788

    netdriver788 Well-Known Member

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    #16
    The design and layout is too simple and the header image is attractive.
     
    netdriver788, Jun 3, 2009 IP
  17. umair ahmed

    umair ahmed Banned

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    #17
    it looks good try to grow up....
     
    umair ahmed, Jun 4, 2009 IP
  18. webmasterh1

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    #18
    Work on your meta's the title shoud not be HOME.
     
    webmasterh1, Jun 4, 2009 IP