Please review my site.

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  1. #1
    I just started a new site and would like someone to review it for me. Tell me what I;m missing and so on.....It is a one deal a day type of site...Please visit http://www.oofew.com

    Thnx.
     
    ChristianSS, Feb 10, 2009 IP
  2. LuckySamurai

    LuckySamurai Active Member

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    Hmm, I have never seen websites like this one. I guess the idea is pretty cool though.

    When I first went to that website I got a javascript alert box that told me the sale is closed for today. At first I had no idea what you were talking about and when I clicked OK and looked at your website for a while (it was confusing for me since you have a lot of stuff on one page) I started to realize what that alert box was trying to tell me. Then again maybe it's just me and my slowness :D

    I wouldn't use an alert box, I would use one of those cool message boxes that fade in after like 5-10 seconds and that message box should tell the people it's sold or closed etc.

    Also try putting terms of service and return policy on a separate page maybe?

    I would lose these: Have a Question?; Have a problem with your order?

    and put them next to the contact us button. Then you should have more room for tomorrow's item and descriptions and stuff so users wouldn't have to scroll the text.

    Just my ideas :)
     
    LuckySamurai, Feb 10, 2009 IP
  3. net-point

    net-point Well-Known Member

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    The forst thing I propose to change is backgroud colour, and add the large banner at the top of your site
     
    net-point, Feb 10, 2009 IP
  4. 2advance

    2advance Well-Known Member

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    Nice logo. I found that there is more empty spaces below the content, remove them.
     
    2advance, Feb 10, 2009 IP
  5. ChristianSS

    ChristianSS Peon

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    Geat suggestions...Keep'em comming...Thnx!
     
    ChristianSS, Feb 11, 2009 IP
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    swalian Banned

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    #6
    logo is unique, but it still not smooth, header and content area is too plain...
     
    swalian, Feb 11, 2009 IP
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    camp185 Well-Known Member

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    The text in your frames does not wrap using Firefox, so usability wise not good. Hard to really tell what you are supposed to do, or what the site is about. I would work on what the new visitor thinks. You will probably have a high bounce rate until your sites purpose is clear.
     
    camp185, Feb 11, 2009 IP
  8. ChristianSS

    ChristianSS Peon

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    Made some major changes to the overall functionality of the site. Thanks for the review
     
    ChristianSS, Feb 13, 2009 IP
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    camp185 Well-Known Member

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    Getting better.
     
    camp185, Feb 13, 2009 IP
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    bajpakhi Banned

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    #10
    Looks good. The logo's nice, except the "FEW" part. Plus the menubar needs a little finishing..
     
    bajpakhi, Feb 15, 2009 IP
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    Yeros Member

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    #11
    looks like that main page and About Us have different page width.
     
    Yeros, Feb 15, 2009 IP
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    #12
    Looks a bit nasty and sliding towards the cheap kind of look and feel
     
    shop-bright, Feb 15, 2009 IP
  13. ChristianSS

    ChristianSS Peon

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    #13
    Nasty and cheap?... imnot-bright I appreciate your comments but as I mentioned in my thread, I would like to know what to improve upon...Unfortunately I'm only able to fix the site…I can’t do anything for your I.Q….sorry

    If anyone else has any constructive critique I would appreciate it.
     
    ChristianSS, Feb 19, 2009 IP
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    #14
    I'd look to spice up the header.
     
    capsis, Feb 19, 2009 IP
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    #15
    like the logo, would like more if it gets loaded bit faster
     
    abhiroop85, Feb 20, 2009 IP
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    #16
    add picture or content at left under pict to be nice.
     
    chester99, Feb 20, 2009 IP
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    Hi... ChristianSS

    I like your site coz cool color.
     
    ivanslackers, Feb 20, 2009 IP
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    #18
    You should add more graphics to the page and fill some of the negative space in the
    left column with some content.
     
    kingofsanda, Feb 20, 2009 IP
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    #19
    very simple, straight forward
     
    studyjava.org, Feb 20, 2009 IP
  20. Poupoutane

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    #20
    merchant site for asian imported goods, that is the topic right ? Nice though, I like the direct style design.
     
    Poupoutane, Feb 21, 2009 IP