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Please review my site www.traffics.biz

Discussion in 'Websites' started by egoldzone, Jul 9, 2019.

  1. #1
    Hi guys,

    Please review my site >> http://traffics.biz
    Hope will get great sugestion

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    Egoldzone
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    egoldzone, Jul 9, 2019 IP
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  2. deathshadow

    deathshadow Acclaimed Member

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    Willy-nilly font size and colour changes for no grammatical or structural reason compromise legibility. A situation only exacerbated by the use of PX metric fonts, widths, and media queries telling users of non-standard default font sizes to either sod off, or deal with broken zooming.

    The dithering pattern on your images looks like something out of the 1990's, and you're wasting images on things that these days shouldn't even be images. You even have text in the images that LOOK like they should be links, such as the "Grab now" part -- but aren't because you slopped them into an image.

    The general lack of text content likely leaves it screwed on search, and isn't all that useful to non-visual users. Nor are your content images all that useful/meaningful since they're shrunk to the point even if they weren't blurred, you couldn't read them.

    Alternative navigation to the form appears to be broken, which gives me the telltale signs of non-semantic markup before I even look at the code.

    it is also painfully slow to watch load, likely stemming from the 1.9 megabytes of resources that indicate sloppy to nonexistant image compression. The thirteen separate files is a bit of a wonk, but not enough to impact load time. One does wonder though why you have 13 files on a page that by my reckoning has no excuse for more than six.

    Popping the bonnet to see what's going on... Well there's your problem.. Bootcrap... REALLY? REALLY?!? a site this painfully and ridiculously simple, where you're inlining static style... and you've thrown bootcrap at it. FOR WHAT?!? This is what I mean by people who use bootstrap NEVER having learned how much more work they're making for themselves because they NEVER seem to have learned how to use HTML or CSS properly, despite clearly attempting to have used them directly.

    Endless pointless DIV for nothing. Static style slopped into the markup. Presentational use of classes. Gibberish heading structure telling non-visual users to sod off. A good 8 separate stylesheets and scripts on a page that only needs one stylesheet and NO JAVASCRIPT. Blocking scripts in the HEAD. Static scripting in the markup where it has ZERO business being. Almost random mixing of PT into a PX layout (where both are /FAIL/ at screen design). STRONG doing numbered headings or LEGEND's job. SPAN for nothing. Paragraphs around content that clearly are NOT grammatical paragraphs. Shoving new windows/tabs down the users gullet whether they want them or not.

    Broken/incomplete form (where's your FIELDSET and LABEL?) with scripttard abuse trying to replicate PLACEHOLDER to do LABEL's job? /FAIL/ hard on probably the most important thing on the page!

    Much less the lack of a DOCTYPE, language, or character encoding declarations. Even the Title tag is pretty much "wrong".

    It's the typical train wreck laundry list of how NOT to build a website I've come to expect from the mentally enfeebled nonsense that is bootcrap, mixed with the telltales of what I can only assume is one of those equally intellectually challenged WYSIWYG editors. Hardly a surprise it's wasting 10.7k of "HTML" (those are air quotes, I'm calling it HTML sarcastically) on delivering 884 bytes of plaintext and only ONE content image. Barely 3k of markup's JOB!

    I'm not sure what garbage WYSIWYG editor screwed with you, but the telltales are all there -- to the point I'm wondering if you tried to mix bootcrap with something horrifically out of date like Frontpage. There is NO legitimate reason given what that page exists to do or is trying to do, for the markup to vary significantly from:

    
    <!DOCTYPE html><html lang="en"><head><meta charset="utf-8">
    <meta
    	name="viewport"
    	content="width=device-width,height=device-height,initial-scale=1"
    >
    <meta
    	name="description"
    	content="Instant buyer traffic that converts for CPA and affiliate offers"
    >
    <link
    	rel="stylesheet"
    	href="screen.css"
    	media="screen,projection,tv"
    >
    <title>
    	traffics.biz - Complete Internet Marketing
    </title>
    </head><body>
    
    <div class="widthWrapper">
    
    	<div id="top">
    		<h1>
    			Complete Internet Marketing<br>
    			<small>2019-20 Made Easy</small>
    		</h1>
    		<a href="#signIUp">Grab Now</a>
    		<p>
    			Enjoy Higher ROI for Your Efforts.
    		</p>
    	</div>
    
    	<ul id="offsiteLinks">
    		<li>
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    			</a>
    		</li><li>
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    		</li>
    	</ul>
    
    	<div class="callToAction">
    		<h2>
    			Brand New Script Drives Unlimited, FREE Buyer Traffic For Profits & Freedom In Less Than 10 Minutes
    		</h2>
    		<p>
    			While you sit back, relax & watch your <strong>traffic, cpa offers, affiliate offers and sales</strong> <em>explode like below!</em>
    		</p>
    		<img
    			src="images/proof.jpg"
    			alt="Proof of our success!"
    			class="plate"
    		>
    		<p class="claim">
    			It's As Easy As A, B, C To Get <strong>Unlimited Free Buyer Traffic & Sales In 10 Minutes</strong>.
    		</p>
    	<!-- .callToAction --></div>
    
    	<form action="/sent.php" method="post" id="signUp">
    		<fieldset>
    			<legend>
    				Enter your name and email below to <strong>get instant access now!</strong>
    			</legend>
    			<label>
    				Your Name:<br>
    				<input type="text" name="firstname" required><br>
    			</label><label>
    				Your E-Mail Address:<br>
    				<input type="email" name="email" required><br>
    			</label>
    			<button>Get Instant Access Now</button>
    		<fieldset>
    		<div>
    			(The download link will be sent to your preferred email.)<br>
    			Your details will never be shared. I hate SPAM as much as you!
    		</div>
    	</form>
    
     <div id="thanks">
    		To Your Success,<br>
    		<b>Taufik M.</b><br>
    		<strong>[Traffics.biz Owner]</strong><br>
    		Contact : <a href="mailto:support@traffics.biz">support@traffics.biz</a>
    	<!-- #thanks --></div>
    
    	<p>
    		PS: Join and get free viral traffic software to generate unlimited traffic that convert for CPA, Affiliate Offers and sales.
    	</p>
    
    	<div id="footer">
    		<hr>
    		<ul>
    			<li><a href="/index.php">Home</a></li>
    			<li><a href="/support.php">Contact Us</a></li>
    			<li><a href="/privacy.php">Privacy</a></li>
    			<li><a href="http://www.leadsleap.com?referid=egoldzone">Free Lead Generation System</a></li>
    		</ul>
    	<!-- #footer --></div>
    
    <!-- .widthWrapper --></div>
    
    <script async src="https://www.googletagmanager.com/gtag/js?id=UA-143546794-1"></script>
    <script>
    	window.dataLayer = window.dataLayer || [];
    	function gtag(){dataLayer.push(arguments);}
    	gtag('js', new Date());
    	gtag('config', 'UA-143546794-1');
    </script>
    
    </body></html>
    
    Code (markup):
    And given what's going on, if that needs more than 8k of external CSS to work, there's something equally wrong.

    As to be brutally frank:

    
    <div style="text-align: center;">&nbsp;</div>
    <div style="text-align: center;">&nbsp;</div>
    <div style="text-align: center;"><img src="../images/proof.jpg" alt="" width="572" height="838" /></div>
    <div style="text-align: center;">&nbsp;</div>
    <div style="text-align: center;"><span style="color: #5c5a5a;"><strong><span style="font-size: 18pt;">&nbsp;</span></strong></span></div>
    <div id="row--10385" class="row bgCover noBorder borderSolid border3px cornersAll radius0 shadow0 P0-top P0-bottom P0H noTopMargin" style="padding-top: 20px; padding-bottom: 20px; margin: 0px; outline: none;" data-trigger="none" data-animate="fade" data-delay="500" data-title="1 column row">
    <div id="col-full-181" class="col-md-12 innerContent col_left" style="outline: none;" data-col="full" data-trigger="none" data-animate="fade" data-delay="500" data-title="1st column">
    <div class="col-inner bgCover  noBorder borderSolid border3px cornersAll radius0 shadow0 P0-top P0-bottom P0H noTopMargin" style="padding: 0 10px;">
    <div id="headline-48906" class="de elHeadlineWrapper ui-droppable de-editable" style="margin-top: 0px; outline: currentcolor none medium; cursor: pointer; font-family: Montserrat, Helvetica, sans-serif !important; text-align: center;" data-de-type="headline" data-de-editing="false" data-title="headline" data-ce="true" data-trigger="none" data-animate="fade" data-delay="500" data-google-font="Montserrat" aria-disabled="false"><span style="font-size: 18pt;">It's As Easy As A, B, C To Get <strong>Unlimited Free Buyer</strong></span><br /><span style="font-size: 18pt;"><strong>Traffic &amp; Sales In 10 Minutes</strong>.</span></div>
    </div>
    </div>
    </div></div>
    Code (markup):
    Is some 100% grade A farm fresh herpa-freaking-derp.

    The "Engrish moist goodry" isn't helping matters either. Hire a professional writer to punch up your copy if this is for a legitimate business.
     
    deathshadow, Jul 12, 2019 IP
  3. egoldzone

    egoldzone Well-Known Member

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    Thanks for your review
     
    egoldzone, Jul 13, 2019 IP