Please review my site www.fitwlholiday.co.uk

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  1. #1
    Hello !
    I want your opinion for the site http://www.fitwlholiday.co.uk.
    Is the design ok? And the html+css code? I want to try make a more atracting template for this site. something with more colors. But if many of you say that the site is ok I can just improve it with no radical change.
    This is a weight loss camp in Romania. It is a great place to lose some weight and have plenty of fun. There are people with experience that want to help you lose some weight and have fun.

    Thanks and hope you reply :)
     
    extr3m3, May 27, 2009 IP
  2. sakto

    sakto Active Member

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    I like the simplicity of the site but I think you need to improve on your header to make it more appealing. And perhaps some graphics or images in the main page will make it even more attractive to visitors. Just my two cents.
     
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  3. seoexpert28

    seoexpert28 Active Member

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    you have good website keep more work on ur site
     
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  4. extr3m3

    extr3m3 Peon

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    ok. I will think of a new header. Other advices. There are over 6000+ users and just 1 advice?
     
    extr3m3, May 28, 2009 IP
  5. HomeComputerGames

    HomeComputerGames Peon

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    Our weight loss camp is located in Transylvania, Romania surrounded by wild mountains and Dracula’s old territory.
    When I read this on your site I thought it was a joke or marketing attention getter. It made me look twice and get suspicious. :D

    You wanted it so here it is:
    Your site looks pretty good. Better than I thought it was going to.

    The Dates page could use a little work perhaps.
    http://www.fitwlholiday.co.uk/datesrates.html

    I think red for the top text may not be correct.
    Try pulling text color from some of the colors in the header image.

    Perhaps pad the cells in the details table so the text isn't so close to the borders.
    Maybe decrease the space between the paragraphs so everything fits nicely.

    I think you have the site ready to tweak. Go through the site and adjust all of the large spacing between Category text and paragraph text. One size should be used throughout the entire site creating uniformity.
    You probably already know all of the pages I am talking about.
    Where the text and space is a little different from the rest of the site.

    Well done.

    Ken
     
    HomeComputerGames, May 28, 2009 IP
  6. justinlorder

    justinlorder Peon

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    Very nice design .
    The problem is the header banner.
    I think the banner should be pictures related to weight loss, not the mountains.
    Also the left menus background look sharp, try to use some rounded corner as background.
     
    justinlorder, May 28, 2009 IP
  7. extr3m3

    extr3m3 Peon

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    :). no joke :p. Romania is a beautifull country but we haven`t got any publicity. Most of you think that Romania is a country of gipsy and so on. But if u look better on the internet you will find out that you have a lot of good places to visit. I will talk tonight with my graff designer and we will make a new header. :)
     
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  8. netdriver788

    netdriver788 Well-Known Member

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    #8
    Good site with simple design and layout.But the logo is not much impressive and you can add an attractive and good looking one.
     
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  9. 2advance

    2advance Well-Known Member

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    I think the background color looks not so good, try to add mixed colors. And also make the content in justify style, looks good..
     
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  10. Kosmix5

    Kosmix5 Peon

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    You are correct in that many outside of Romania won't have a clue what your country has to offer. You need to be more specific about your program and the type of accommodations you offer or people might assume they'll be doing calisthenics at gunpoint and sleeping on a concrete floor. You need recommendations and accreditation from tourists who have successfully completed your course (and lived to tell.) :)

    On your internal category pages like "what we offer" and "types of exercises" you might want to show actual images of people taking part in your program, or athletic models jogging, or something that will relate to physical fitness. You have great photos in your gallery but you have to scroll through too many tourist shots to get to what people really want to see-which is where they'll be staying. You would be better served by showing thumbnails of each picture on one page so people can enlarge what they want to see.
     
    Kosmix5, Jun 3, 2009 IP
  11. gilangotboy

    gilangotboy Banned

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    #11
    Nice background and color.
     
    gilangotboy, Jun 3, 2009 IP
  12. kaioken89

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    #12
    the mountains and the background color make weight loss seem natural. Great design.
     
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  13. sanjay.seo

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    #13
    Site looks good.

    But I thing landing page banner is not match with your site theme.
     
    sanjay.seo, Jun 3, 2009 IP
  14. extr3m3

    extr3m3 Peon

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    this will be done today. i have several testimonials and pictures. thumbnails of each picture that`s what i had in mind. But I had some work making this site html4 transitional. The header also will be replaced but the two that i made were not very succsesfull for the real owner. :)
     
    extr3m3, Jun 4, 2009 IP
  15. umair ahmed

    umair ahmed Banned

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    #15
    It looks good but you need to do more attention towards content....
     
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    Nice site, keep it up...
     
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  17. extr3m3

    extr3m3 Peon

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    more info please?
     
    extr3m3, Jun 4, 2009 IP
  18. Kosmix5

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    I think they may be referring to the "Dracula" comment..unless blood-drinking is the latest fad in weight loss. :)
     
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    #19
    good..very nice
     
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  20. extr3m3

    extr3m3 Peon

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