Hi friend Please review my new site www.FanpageShopBuilder.com Hope will get good response Thanks egoldzone
First thing would be that getting yourself a Favicon could go a lot way, it looks really odd just being transparency. The "Turn your Facebook Page Into a Money Making Amazon/Ebay Store in less than 5 Minutes and Make $100 a Day!" could definitely use some line spacing between it, it just has a real cluttered feel when reading it. Only other thing which is probably only actually an issue to me and not others but I just find that the yellowish-orange isn't the most attractive colour for a website. A lightish-darkish blue gradient could look nice but that's just a personal colour preference in the end. Good luck with your website, I hope I helped. Now after trying to leave your website I must say: Remove that damn thing that tries to stop you from leaving, if people want to stay on the website for any longer they wouldn't be clicking the small x on the tab.
Your site looks great. It's not that complicated to navigate and you made good use of color swatches. It's good for the eyes and easy to browse through. Keep up your great work!
Seems like a simple sales page but your product is interesting and I may buy it I was thinking about facebook shop for quite a while.
Thanks. There will be more prouduct ranges coming soon. For link's product , is a health supplement and the distributor is in singapore. Their Health supplement can been purchases at our local hospitals like sgh, nuh, mount elizebeth. Dr highly recommend their patients to consume but can't be purchase at NTUC, Waston and other's retail. Supply ib to hospitals, lot's of foreigner support this brand. Thanks to all the supplier support. If you can't find in retail store, probably can get in on online shop.
Good Design and the way you mentioned in it. Its very nice to see, put more materials and you will get high rank.