Please review my site - www.Binary-Options.club

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    egoldzone, May 27, 2014 IP
  2. nostressmaven

    nostressmaven Well-Known Member

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    Hi
    I just looked at your site and I have several suggestions for you.

    First, what is your reason for having a site?
    You have 3 seconds when someone lands on your page to get them to read more or leave.
    I can't tell if you are trying to sell a service, recommend other places of service or both.
    When someone lands on your page you MUST answer this question for them-
    WIIFM- What's in it for me? They want to know...what do you have for me????? Then 3 seconds... you have to be clear in the first paragraph or picture- what you have for them.
    What are you doing for them, why did you invite them to your site, what problem or pain do they have that you can solve for them?

    Your first paragraph is this:
    Fast Guide To Make Money By Trading Binary Options-

    Trading binary options can change your life! Whether you’re a stay at home parent or a professional day trader, trading binary options will bring in additional revenue.

    Learn how to make easy income by trading binary options, how find most profitable trading software and regulated broker with fast withdrawal process, Also how to follow and copy the best trader to make big profits.

    Find Top Ranking Brokers With The Best Features

    So are you selling a guide to make money? Are you giving one away? Are you helping me find brokers who will help me make money?
    I can't tell with your copy...

    If you are selling the guide, which I think you might be down the page, then make it clear-YOU have the solution to end all their problems....!!!
    Buy putting a button in the middle of the 1. and 2. and in between pictures and graphs, I cannot tell if you are selling it or someone else is.

    So keep it simple- figure out if you want to make them a pitch and add in the extra help with other brokers, or tell them the answer to all their money problems is to go to these other brokers. Be clear. Do not make them think.
    Tell them what you have, tell them again, then tell them what you want them to do, then tell them where and how to do what you want them to do... and all the while solving a problem for them, getting them out of pain.

    Your site name and tagline are:

    Binary-Options.Club
    Best Binary Options Strategy and Brokers


    How about suing that space for a good headline and tagline. They already clicked on your link so telling them the url is a waste of space and prime realty on your site.

    If you want to tell them they've just landed at The Best Binary Options Club ever, then tell them that.

    Your first two lines in the first paragraph might be a better headline or site title- add in the word Discover to help-

    Discover the Best Guide To Make Money Now By Trading Binary Options

    or

    Make Easy Income With Our Fast Binary Options Trading Plan


    You have the word trading in some places and not in others. I would use the word trading in your meta info- it is not there now. It is a good catch word to help in seaches/SEO

    Url: http://binary-options.club/

    Title: Best binary options broker and regulated brokers Binary Options Club

    Meta keywords:

    Meta description: Best binary options broker and regulated brokers

    I would keep your points 1. and 2. without an offer in the midst of them. IF you want to make an offer, make an offer, put it in a box, make it bold, make it easy to find and give someone a reason to look for it when skimming down the page, motivate them, let them know you have something great... that is why it is called a sales page.
    Right now you are a bit heavy in keyword stuffing your paragraphs in places so it does not read naturally and easily.
    Give them a good reason to want to read more and go down your page.... make them want more, then give them more.

    Also, I would not have comments available on the home page. Blog page, yes, have comments if you want. Home page -no I would not do that. It does not look professional to me, unless you are asking for comments and will answer questions and that you are asking for feedback on the home page, them comments are great.

    I hope that these hints and tips will be helpful to you. I wish you much success!
    Mel
     
    nostressmaven, May 27, 2014 IP
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    Very great suggestion
    Thank you
     
    egoldzone, May 28, 2014 IP