Guys, David Carradine has asked me to do a site for his new book coming out October 1st. The site is up at http://www.thekillbilldiary.com This week ill be shooting a video ad of him on the homepage kind of a welcome message to his fans. I was wondering if you guys could give me some advice on how to make the page better and possibly edit the html for me so i can optomize it to show more google ads. Any help or advice would be greatly appreciated. I have attached the html page for you to edit if you choose to help me. Also is it safe to say i should achieve good ranking for the words "kill bill diary" or "The Kill Bill Diary" because those words are in the domain? Once its spidered that is.
i forgot to mention i also own the following domains and was wondering what i should do with them that might help my ranking i own thekillbilldiary.net/.org killbilldiary.com/net/org killbilldiaries.com by the way anyone wanting to help i will send you a signed copy of this book.
I think the design is good but the blood seems a little fake. Try to make it look like the one at the book itself. Also, don´t repeat the background or if you are going to do it, make it so it doesn´t go behind the other images, it looks weird when it goes behind the second book image (blood ends abruptly.) Another thing you can try is adding some kind of japanese or western decoration to the header image, to look more like the theme of the movie. As for the ads, I don´t know why there are google ads on an official web but if you want them to blend, make them with yellow background, no border, black text, red url and move them a little to the right, so it doesn´t overlap with the black bar of the background. Also, do you have proof that you are working for david carradine? I don´t get the whole google ads thing on an official page of him. BTW, if this is real I'd love to get a signed copy
As far as proof of it being official? Why would i lie? Look at my hanzoswords.com site there will be proof soon enough, im filming a video intro for the site soon, as well as for his myspace page which im the admin for at http://www.myspace.com/officialdavidcarradine The google ads will be there as an experiment if its not creating decent revenue i will take them off. Thanks for the suggestions.
i hate killbill....i dont like your design ..im very sorry .. i like life and i like humans....good luck
I saw hansoswords. If I were in USA I would buy one right now. It looks legit, you are very lucky I will try to help you in the design but I´m busy tomorrow so if you still need help on monday I will try to do something.
Would fix the blood. The google ads at the bottom seem a little strange for something that is for David Carradine
You might want to fix the background image of the page as now it looks broken. I would use only two different fonts, which will make the whole site look more consistent. It is also true, that ads at the bottom will be ineffective. I think that you could place them under the header. I think that the alignment of the form could be also fixed. Those product item images could be smaller and placed next to each other, you could also try to highlight them with a different color of the background, maybe even red.