Please review my site: Stop Paying For Clicks

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    This is a landing page to generate leads for a service I offer. I already have clients, but I just made this website. Please review it and tell me what you think.


    Stop Paying For Clicks


    Thanks in advance.
     
    oregonthunder2, Feb 24, 2011 IP
  2. hhsaus

    hhsaus Active Member

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    If it's a landing page you want to make sure the visitors can see as much of it without having to scroll down! Personally i would just close the page. Now if the info was visible as soon as i hit the site, i would potentially read it.

    Hope that helps you a bit.
     
    hhsaus, Feb 24, 2011 IP
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    why you did not add a logo or image header to your site :)
     
    jatrasmara, Feb 24, 2011 IP
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    oregonthunder2 Active Member

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    Thanks. Your right. I will have to search around for a different template. If anybody knows a of good free landing site template. Please let me know.

     
    oregonthunder2, Feb 24, 2011 IP
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    igX Well-Known Member

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    In my opinion, 'Open Panel/Close Panel' link is not working as it should
     
    igX, Feb 25, 2011 IP
  6. Michal James

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    It looks simple!
     
    Michal James, Feb 25, 2011 IP
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    The header is too wide, maybe get a logo. I also wouldn't use the same color that your are using on the headline and the body. I would leave the headline color and change the body's important text color to like red
     
    gizmo101.net, Feb 25, 2011 IP
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    Really bad design
     
    dhee, Feb 25, 2011 IP
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    dr.smsm07 Peon

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    it looks good and why don't you add a logo ?
     
    dr.smsm07, Feb 27, 2011 IP
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    upchd Active Member

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    Good information, simple site, I agree with everyone else. Good luck
     
    upchd, Feb 27, 2011 IP
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    I am a newbie to all of this stuff but I will be honest as I am from Brooklyn New York and you can use some honest criticism. This page I landed on I would back right out of. It looks like one of those "scam" sites...

    Now I have not been on many blogs and stuff, so it this look or style is standard I apologize.
     
    biiggmike23, Feb 27, 2011 IP